Dudebot5000
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Looks pretty good so far. But you're somehow missing around half your profile, lol.
And now that we have an edit, I can comment on the rest, lol.
Infinite ammo is a no-go; I'd draw a limit at ~200 before he has to reload.
And surely you can make a more descriptive Personality and Description.
And you're still missing his other powers, unless you make the cannons his only power. In that case (Provided it's using Ki ammo), almost-infinite ammo might be a possibility; you'd still have to count for fatigue.
Fix those up, and you should be approved.
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« Last Edit: March 23, 2010, 09:47:10 pm by Dudebot5000: The King of Braves »
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