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Title: Hiding in the Flames, disscusion Post by: Rakoua on August 26, 2008, 02:46:40 pm Epic here (http://mln.smfforfree4.com/index.php/topic,1504.0.html)
Please review here! Title: Re: Hiding in the Flames, disscusion Post by: The Host on August 27, 2008, 07:42:28 am I like the mystery of the whole plot so far, although i think you need to use more descriptive language. The whole story so far is really a good plot ;D
Title: Re: Hiding in the Flames, disscusion Post by: Rakoua on August 27, 2008, 08:13:56 am Tha's as far as I can go with descriptive language, ZLS. :P
Thanks! Title: Re: Hiding in the Flames, disscusion Post by: KnightsFan on August 29, 2008, 04:20:40 pm Interesting... Is this inspired by Dune any? :P Do you mean that half the planet is always day and half always night?
|< |= Title: Re: Hiding in the Flames, disscusion Post by: Rakoua on August 30, 2008, 05:06:06 am I didn't take inspiration, and yes.
Title: Re: Hiding in the Flames, disscusion Post by: KnightsFan on September 03, 2008, 02:00:04 pm That's interesting. That's the first type of planet like that I've heard of. Good originality.
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