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Title: World Domination - Discussion Post by: KnightsFan on September 08, 2008, 04:31:00 pm Discuss my epic World Domination here!
Epic (http://mln.smfforfree4.com/index.php/topic,1580.0.html) |< |= Title: Re: World Domination - Discussion Post by: The Host on September 12, 2008, 07:31:25 pm You have a good plot started, and it is quite catchy, having only a certain number of words per post makes me want more...
Only thing is, you need more description in your writing, otherwise its great. Can't wait for next part ;D Title: Re: World Domination - Discussion Post by: KnightsFan on September 15, 2008, 03:25:21 pm Thanks! I'll try to be more descriptive.
|< |= Title: Re: World Domination - Discussion Post by: The Host on September 16, 2008, 06:04:09 pm so the 300 word thingy... :P
and a bird can fly if its not an ostrich or emu :P But seriously: good job, I love the plot ;D Title: Re: World Domination - Discussion Post by: KnightsFan on September 16, 2008, 06:10:07 pm Thank you! Rakoua told me he'd like it better without the word limit, so I'm making it ~300 words.
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