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Title: The Awakening -- Review Topic Post by: Magical Girl Mimi on February 05, 2009, 11:23:46 am Comment on The Awakening here.
Story link. (http://mln.smfforfree4.com/index.php/topic,2582.0.html) Title: Re: The Awakening -- Review Topic Post by: KnightsFan on February 05, 2009, 11:40:01 am Ooh, good. I like the idea - humans and Bionicle in the same world. I'm glad you're in the real Bionicle world and not Glatoria.
Do you need guest stars? |< |= Title: Re: The Awakening -- Review Topic Post by: Magical Girl Mimi on February 05, 2009, 11:46:40 am Ooh, good. I like the idea - humans and Bionicle in the same world. I'm glad you're in the real Bionicle world and not Glatoria. 1. Yeeeah... Humans and Bionicle in the same world. Right. >_> <_< >_> <_< >_> <_<Do you need guest stars? |< |= 2. Yeah, Karda Nui for now, before the Awakening of Mata Nui. 3. If you want. I'm still working out exactly how they look and such, but I think I've got it pretty much. Title: Re: The Awakening -- Review Topic Post by: The Host on February 05, 2009, 11:59:08 am I love the suspence/unknown aspect you've left at the end of the chapter. It makes me want to read on, except there's nothing else to read :P
Good job! Title: Re: The Awakening -- Review Topic Post by: Magical Girl Mimi on February 05, 2009, 12:01:08 pm Thanks. =)
I think I might start work on Chapter 1, I've got a few ideas, some of which will *Spoilers of something else here*. =D Title: Re: The Awakening -- Review Topic Post by: The Host on February 05, 2009, 12:51:57 pm Cool. I like how you added yourself into 08 storyline. Adds a nice change to the story, and it gives me something Bionicle to read while I wait for the 09 book and other web serials :)
Title: Re: The Awakening -- Review Topic Post by: Magical Girl Mimi on February 05, 2009, 01:03:58 pm That won't be the only change to the '08 storyline... ;)
Title: Re: The Awakening -- Review Topic Post by: Legodac on February 28, 2009, 05:30:19 am Intersting, and creative, but "Are you ready for a challenge"
The challenge is a contest, I hope you enter.. "Interesting" and "creative" because I use a simalar style when writing. I put myself in the story because I believe it enhances imagination |