My LEGO Nexus Organization

A contest in CREATIVE WRITING. Tell a short story, your theme perimeters are as follows:
 :) your story takes place in the past, from 500 million years BC to yesterday, if you don't like history class, then give us the FUTURE
 :) Use existing LEGO themes or create a new LEGO theme, ie: I've allways loved the idea of LEGO LINK
 :) Relax and use your imagination, I won't be judging SPELLLINGE, that's up to your Grammar teacher
 :) Prizes are as follows: 1st All 7 totemic animals
                                2nd is 60 fuel cells
                                 3rd is 3 licenses
 :) Contest runs 1st and last halves of each month, good luck and may the Brick be with you

  ;) Small revision, I'd like to remove all restrictions, A wiser man than me once told me, more limits, less entries, so write what you want to write about, Thanks KF

I'll join!




  One day, sometime in the 1900s, Radia and her pals are working to find a new anti-virus software. That virus is very powerful, powerful enough to beat a giant in one blow. Eventually, the virus is too quick and too agile, so every computer in Lego Land has the virus infected.
   Because the Alpha team had no way of defending the virus, which was late known created by Dr. Inferno. Radia and her team members are too old to fight an dcapture the evil Inferno, so another group was created--- the Agents. The Agents were young men who have special abilities, just like the mutants in X-men. Hikaru and takeshi, from the exo-force group, also helped fight the villian. They used teh machines to fight the mean Dr. Inferno, but nothing worked. Dr Inferno was ingenious about fighting.
   After a couple of days, a strange thing happened. Dr inferno's own computer also got infected by his own virus! With the worst anti-virus software, Inferno's compter exploded. The stolen crystals became neon lights, the computer became a robo-dog, and posters in the room became trees. The Lego Universe is created! Dr. Inferno had no longer anymore plans, thus he is caught by the virus he created. The virus has finally done some good.

may i enter again?

The Kidnapped and Foreign Sovereign
   There once was a nice and brave king of the country Lionytai, in the planet of Lego Universe. This smart king, named Arthur, liked mathematics and science. He even used his good science skills to capture villains, and one of the most evil villains was just caught - Bob Skull, a spooky skeleton who betrayed Star Justice, a society for finding justice in outer space, on mln.lego.com. MLN is a webpage system for Lego users. Bob, from outer space, led many Lego club users to betray Star Justice. Bob even stole the secret plans from Star Justice!
   Thousand-year-old Brian Skull didn't like the way his twin brother was put in prison right below the palace of Lionytai. He visited Bob Skull secretly everyday by using a satellite to locate where Bob was, and then came down the path made by the satellite. He didn't know what to do to seek for revenge, so he was really angry.
   For several times, a person with a mask and a cape attacked the king. King Arthur's strong army had beaten the masked person in a white shirt with black stripes, so this made the masked person frustrated. The day after the last fight the king mysteriously disappeared. The villagers came to a detective team in another country named Mutant because Lionytai didn't have one. Lionytai was just too small.
   "Could you please help us? We couldn't live without the king! Our lives would be ruined!" The villagers explained a lot.
   "Ok, we will help you. Take me to the palace," said Pepper. Pepper, the leader of the detective team, was worried about the serious case. He was a hard-working person.
   The villagers led Pepper and his partner Johnny Lighting the way to their country. Johnny was as fast as sound and he was once an assistance of a famous archaeologist. Because of this, he was brainy compared to others. When they walked past the house of the president of Mutant on the way, Johnny accidentally found some rare minerals on the wheels ofPepper's skateboard, which Pepper always uses to travel, during a rest from the long walk, which Pepper always uses to travel. In fact, Pepper accidentally fell out from the skateboard and landed on the king's crown.
    "Thanks for leading us to your country. We will stop here. You can go back," said Pepper. The villagers went back to their country and Pepper and Johnny took out their PC in Johnny's backpack to do some research, sitting in a bench near the president's house.
   "Hmm... Let's see," said Johnny. Johnny was looking for information about the president and Pepper was beside him looking at the news website too. "Ah ha! Here's what we want! 'Mr. President of Mutant, who really loves to visit famous people, went on vacation to visit well-known actor Johnny Thunder, the newest actor of James Bond. The President likes James Bond movies, and he always went to see how the movie was going.' Johnny Thunder?! I didn't know Johnny Thunder was that good at acting!" Johnny Lighting jumped out of the bench. Johnny Thunder was Johnny Lighting's cousin. "When I visited him the last time, he told me he was going to visit a celebrity. Why did the president go to visit him instead?"
   "Maybe Johnny Thunder didn't have time. Or maybe it's another celebrity he's visiting. Or even it might be a secret plan that no one else should know. Anyway, let's go to the police station and tell the police about what we just found," replied Pepper, "about the iridium we found on my skateboard. We've got work to do."
   At the police station, Pepper and Johnny Lighting met Dr. Killroy, an extremely famous and experienced archaeologist of the whole Legoland. Killroy was really humorous and liked to talk about what he finds at excavation sites.
   "Howdy, Pepper and Johnny! It's nice to see you again!" Dr. Killroy patted their shoulders. "You know, I was working at an excavation site. A really special excavation site I went to. Guess what we excavated!" Dr. Killroy liked to make people guess about what he recently did.
   "Extremely large bird-like dinosaurs?" Johnny knew that Dr. Killroy mostly went to dinosaur excavation sites because Johnny was once an assistance of Dr. Killroy, just as mentioned before.
   "Never-ever-found-before-and-larger-than-a-human archaic pizza that apes once ate?" Pepper always had ideas people never thought of.
   "Not quite, boys." Killroy finally told them the answer. "We are excavating a meteorite! Look at this precious iridium I found!" Johnny and Pepper were shocked in amazement.
   "Pepper! Psst! Psst! I think this is the substance we found on your skateboard's wheels," Johnny whispered to Pepper. Pepper nodded his head to show agreement.
   "We'd better leave, Dr Killroy. We have some work to do. So long!" Dr. Killroy waved and Pepper and Johnny went back where they found iridium. They also found King Arthur and Brain Skull, who was holding the king's crown. Pepper picked up a rope which Brain didn't notice and threw it to Johnny. Johnny then threw the rope on Brian. Just then, a police officer arrived from the police station.
   "Freeze, Brian Skull, or anyone who you are! You're under arrest!" yelled the officer. He sounded mean and angry.
"I...I admit it. I kidnapped the king! I took the crown but lost it and found it again! I...I wanted to save Bob! I could be as famous as Bob if I take the crown to my emperor in outer space! My queen would be proud of me!" Bob sounded really disappointed.
"Did you say outer space? That's why I found iridium on my skateboard's wheels when I found the crown. Now I get it!" Pepper began to figure things out.
"You are incorrect zero percent. But now my plans are all destroyed! Boo hoo!" Bob began to weep. He knelt down, his head facing the ground. Everything went silent for a couple of minutes. The police officer finally spoke.
“Brian, you’ll be put in jail for...” The king interrupted the police officer's words.
"I have other plans,” the king said. He had a smile in his face. "I found out that Brian isn't a really bad skeleton. He is only just too impatient and can be taught to be a great hero."
The next day, the king was back in the palace. Brian Skull became the teacher of teaching the prisoners how to be nice. Everyone cheered for the king and Brian and the country is peaceful forever.

   On day long, long ago in LEGOville there was a very eccentric inventor. This inventor spent all of his time working on “The best invention that LEGOville has ever seen.” However, years passed, and the people of LEGOville grew weary of the eccentric inventor. It seemed like he had made absolutely no progress whatsoever. They started dropping by his house less and less to find out what he was making, and spending more and more time as far away from him as they could. Eventual, nobody ever came by to find out how his invention was coming along. But that day that nobody came along, he finally finished his invention. It was a…. time machine! He ran into town telling everyone that he had completed his invention, but nobody was there! He ran around, and he found a note. It said:

Dear Professor,
    We have grown tired of your rambles and have decided to leave LEGOville to start a new town. If you ever finish the invention, please post us.
    From,
  The people of LEGOville

     The professor was shattered. He had worked on this invention for all these years so they could have a better home, and they had left him! He sadly walked home, and found out that his door was unlocked. When he went to the time machine he found it had already been used, as well. Thinking about how odd it was, he noticed another note. It read:

Dear Professor,
   We heard your rambles as we were leaving town, so we came up here and used your time machine. We entered the ‘2000 years from now time.’ Thank you Professor for doing this.
   From,
 The people of LEGOville

     Hurriedly he entered the time machine and set the time for ‘2000 years from now.’ And he didn’t notice the dog that had entered the time machine until he had started twisting through time. When he came out, he found the whole town waiting for him. And the dog, which he had noticed as soon as he started twisting through time, had turned robotic. It was a robo-dog! The people of LEGOville thanked him profusely. They had gotten to a new time – the time of LEGO Universe!


So, that's my story.

I'm a little confused, but legodac told me to post this so...

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Wham! Rocks and debris sprayed everywhere. Javic ducked, narrowly missing losing his head to a stray rock. Arrows started zipping past, causing Javic to dive for cover behind a rock. He still couldn’t see through the dust swirling through the night air. Who was attacking? What was attacking?
More rocks sailed into the ruined fortress, wreaking havoc on the strong stone walls. Dark shapes began forming in the dust. Lots of dark shapes. With a yell, Javic drew his sword and slew two of the shapes before they knew he was there. A sword swung towards his head, but with an expert slash the arm wielding the sword was on the ground. Three more of the shapes sprang forward, but Javic wasn’t worried. He sprinted forward a few steps, jumped off a rock, and flipped over them, slashing one down in midair. Allies began flowing from the broken fortress, hacking down their attackers. But the battle’s conclusion was obvious…

Three days later found Javic walking alone over the mountains, away from the destruction. He paused, scanned the terrain ahead. A large city stood in his way, the trade center of the entire land: Gathai.
Through the city Javic walked, straight to the great citadel in the center. Here, he found one of the captains.
“An attack, you say?”
“Massive at that. They crept up silently then used some giant ballista to fling rocks straight into our fortress. Hundreds of well-trained warriors stormed in.”
“Strange,” the captain mused, “they attack a fortress like Paltech. It is of no strategical value along the frontier – it can be easily cut off. There must be another reason then all-out war on our kingdom.”
“Or possibly it’s just a cover,” Javic suggested, “but what I want to know is what you’re going to do about it?”
“I will bring up this information at the meeting tonight. We have good barracks, if you want…”
“Never mind me, I’ll be off,” Javic interrupted.
“Where to?”
“Paltech. I’m going to have a look around.”
“Alone?”
“Yes,” Javic smiled a little, “that way I won’t be held up by some gallant knight in armor.”
The captain looked at Javic. He certainly didn’t look like any of the knights he had ever seen. More like an outlaw: his clothes were all black, and light enough to move easily in. No armor whatsoever. A bow and full quiver were stored on his back, underneath his cloak. A short sword hung on his left hip, while several daggers and knives balanced it. Looking closer, the captain thought but what a sword! I’ve never seen the like!

Standing still as a statue in the black night, he listened. He was back at Paltech by now. For the last few hours he had been dodging patrols of… what? He still couldn’t identify them. Most were in dull grey mail with masks. Their flags flapping in the light breeze were not to be recognized. The few times Javic had heard them speak he couldn’t even make out what language they were speaking.
Around noon, he got fed up with hiding. A patrol of five was walking slowly towards him. He casually left his hiding place and stepped onto the path.
All five reacted fast. They started, but as one lifted their shields, lowered spears and slowly advanced.
“Who are you?” Javic asked, still without drawing his weapons.
No answer.
“What do you want?”
No answer. They were only twenty feet away when he drew his bow, and, fast as lightning, sent an arrow zipping into the face of one of his adversaries! It bounced harmlessly off the mask.
Drawing his sword, Javic charged.
He grabbed a handful of dirt and flung it in their faces, slashing at a spear with his sword. The wood handle broke in half before the razor edge of the sword. Before they could react, Javic had leaped backwards, pulled a dagger and sent it zipping into the neck of one, right between the mask and the mail.
The four remaining had by now surrounded him, spears pointing at him from all directions. He leaped up and forward, landing on a spear and knocking it to the ground. The other pulled a sword and slashed at Javic’s head, but found only air. Javic’s sword didn’t.
Whack! A spear handle cracked down of his head. Fighting to stay conscious, Javic staggered back, reeling from the blow. He barely dodged the thrust that followed, but managed to stay out of range. He melted back into the woods, out of sight.
“Having fun?” A voice asked.
Whirling, Javic found himself facing a masked warrior lounging against a tree.
“Oh, don’t worry; I’m not looking for a fight. Not with you anyway.”
“Who are you?” Javic asked, trying to collect his wits.
“That doesn’t matter as much as finding a better place to talk. This is quite unprotected, you know. He pointed at the three soldiers, who were poking around the bushes looking for them. He beckoned, and slipped through the trees.

After several minutes, Javic found himself looking at the fortress of Paltech. From a nearby hill.
“Now,” said the stranger, “we won’t be overheard here. Who are you?”
“Javic, a traveler.”
“I am – how shall I put it – an agent. Name of Mokaine What I am doing here is quite confidential, but I assure you it will not effect anyone who does not try to interfere. Unlike them,” He nodded towards Paltech.
“You know who they are?” Javic asked.
“Of course. They are old non-friends of mine, those ol’ Azkakh. They are hardly human at all, they live for treasure. They hoard up treasure all their days and never do anything with it. They never do anything else.”
“Then why did they attack Paltech?”
Mokaine’s eyes twinkled. “You’re a sharp one, aren’t you? That, my friend, is a very good question. A very good question indeed. That is why I’m here: to find out why they attacked. Having been inside the fort, I thought you might know.”
“No treasure whatsoever,” Javic confirmed, “the captain there was a very good friend of mine, he told me that there was nothing of any real value. So then what are you going to do?”
“Another good question. Obviously the Azkakh thought there was something here, or they wouldn’t have attacked.”
“If they are so bent on treasure, I would have thought they’d leave by now after not finding anything,” Javic mused.
Mokaine’s eyebrows rose, “You know, you really were a lucky find. Either they are still searching, or they know something your captain friend didn’t. There’s only one way to find out, though.”
“How?”
“Tonight, my friend, we will sneak into the fortress and snoop around. Unless you want to miss out, of course.” Receiving a quick shake of the head, Mokaine outlined his plan. “You must find the best way in, as you know the place better then me. Next we will locate the leader’s bunk. There I will put out the leader and you will search the room. If you find anything pertaining to Paltech, take it. We will escape to a nice rooftop and there we will examine any finds you made. Got it? Good. Tonight it is, then…”

The night was cloudless, with a big, full moon. Both knew their work was cut out for them sneaking into the stone fortress. The wind blew noisily through the trees and rocks, effectively covering any noises they made.
Silently Javic led the way to the wall wreaked by catapults the day of the attack. A dozen or more guards lounged around there. Time of plan B. Going to the back wall, Javic found the small back gate. Coming from the side, he pressed against the wall to stay under the guards’ vision. He used oil supplied by Mokaine to grease the hinges, and then set to work on the lock. With a small dagger he carefully prodded the heavy bolt. It was quite solid. Frustrated, Javic turned away. Suddenly, the door opened! Inside stood six soldiers, wielding swords and grim looks.
“Uh, Mokaine? We have a problem…”
Mokaine drew his sword and leaped into action, scything through one, then grabbing the body and using it as a shield to ward off the flurry of blows from the other five. Javic whipped out his sword and charged. Seeing a blade swinging at his head, he dove into a roll, knocking two of the soldiers off their feet with his body, then leaped up and traded blows with one of those still standing.
Throwing away his “shield,” Mokaine whipped his blade and, with an expert move, disarmed an enemy seconds before driving his blade home. Then he whipped out a small knife and flung it whistling through the air into the last remaining enemy.
“Nice work,” he said, “but I’ve got a bad feeling about this…” At least a score of their adversaries were rushing towards them, off the walls, from the barracks, seething through the doors.
“Time to go,” Javic said, making a rush for the door.
“Couldn’t agree more,” Mokaine said, jumping out and slamming the small gate shut. “Now what? We don’t know anything still. By tomorrow their guard will be up and possibly they’ll be gone.
“Then we get the information tonight,” Javic said, leading the way to the front gate. As he expected, it was unguarded. He looked furtively around then made a dash for the keep. He dove gracefully through the window, rolling across the floor inside without a sound. He slithered across the floor, under a table and to the far wall. From there he leaped, caught the ceiling and pushed a trapdoor used for dropping debris on attackers open. He whipped his body up and in, then took stock of his surroundings.
“Give a hand to those not as agile,” Mokaine whispered from the room below. After helping him up, Javic led the way, this time slower, towards the captain’s old room. Upon finding it he put his eye to the keyhole and looked in. A figure stood by the window. Putting his bow to the large hole, Mokaine silently drew the arrow back, and fired the arrow swiftly into the back of the figure, then entered the room.
“Quick, search for anything pertaining to Paltech! He tackled a desk, rifling through the drawers for documents. After a few minutes, he pulled something out and put it in a pouch at his waist, then listened. Footsteps coming along the hall!
He beckoned to Javic, and then rushed to the window. Guards everywhere. He drew his sword and jumped. Wham! Clash! He landed on a guard then slashed another. Javic landed lightly beside him, whipped out a bow and shot a third.
Without another backward glance, both fled.

“All in all, I’d say that went well,” Mokaine said, “we slew nine Azkakh warriors at least, plus a captain or some other type of officer. More importantly, we got this,” he held aloft a stack of papers, bound with a string.
“What’s that?”
“Dunno, but it’s the only thing I found that said Paltech on it.” He undid the string, and glanced through the papers. He gasped.
“It’s a plan of the fortress!” He whispered, “look!”
“Yeah,” Javic agreed, “so?”
“And this paper here, it’s a puzzle of some kind.”

Tsewhtron renroc
Ytnewt secap tsae
Evif teef nwod

“It pretty obvious, isn’t it?” Javic said, “backwards words. It says, ‘Northwest corner, Twenty paces east, Five feet down.”
“I wonder what’s there.” Mokaine murmured.
“Another clue, most likely,” Javic said, “and so on until they come to the treasure of all ages.”
“If the clues are this easy, they’d have found the treasure in an hour,” Mokaine objected.
“Maybe they get harder.”

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If I have time I may add more.

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O.K... When are you sending the prizes?

Anyway, here's my entry:


“This is Rita Blisstow. My mission: Discover who is the possessor of the Mind Control Emitter and what his/her plans are,” Rita told me.
   “O.K…? I thought this rank was all about music?” I questioned her
   “It was, until I intercepted part of this message from an opposing spy to their master. It reads:
……………….. This is agent……………stolen the mind control machine………………….hand the machine…………………..possession of the codebook……………………….remember me…………….take over the world……….out!

   “What are all of those dots for?” I asked inquisitively.
   “Those are the words that I couldn’t recognize. You see, this code is nearly unbreakable, and the fact that I cracked some of it is astounding. In a message I sent you previously, I need you to get the Mind Control Emitter back, even if you have to give its owner the secret Code Book,” Rita Finished
   “O.K. But why can’t you do this?”
   “Because I’m being blackmailed.”
   “By who?”
   “The owner of the mind Control Emitter”
   “Who is that?”
   “That’s what you’re supposes to find out!”
   “Oh, yeah!” I remembered
   “Now, agent, go do your job!!” And with that, Rita hung up.
   “Well, where to start?” I wondered. Then I remembered Rita’s message “ …build some HFM’s and send them to David Lampton and his band.
   “Right,” I said to myself, and got to work. Once I was done, I sent them to David Lampton’s entire band. David sent me the Codebook BP. Rick, Seno, and Izzy sent me the secret messages, which I used to make the Codebook. But JP Varity’s message was interesting. It read:

   “Sorry sir! I must have nodded off. I’m so woozy. Let me start again. This is agent JP, reporting in. I have successfully stolen the mind control machine. These fools have no Idea what they’re in for! Unless my orders have changed, I will hand the Mind Control Emitter over to the agent who proves that they are in possession of the Codebook. We’re almost there, sir! Remember me when you take over the world! JP Out.”

I quickly rushed over to Rita’s place (for this was much too important for phone).
“Hello,” she greeted me, “What are you doing over here?”
   “Man, have I got news for you! When I sent JP Variety a HFM, he sent me this:

           “Sorry sir! I must have nodded off. I’m so woozy. Let me start again. This is agent JP, reporting in. I have successfully stolen the mind control machine. These fools have no Idea what they’re in for! Unless my orders have changed, I will hand the Mind Control Emitter over to the agent who proves that they are in possession of the Codebook. We’re almost there, sir! Remember me when you take over the world! JP Out.”
When she finished reading the message, she asked
   “Did you get the Codebook?”
   I gulped, “Yes, and I sent it to JP Variety”
   “You WHAT!?” she screamed
   “Don’t worry, he sent me the MCE (Mind Control Emitter)” I said nervously.
   Her attitude changed instantly,” Good Job, agent,” she congratulated me, “I know that I can count on you in the future.”

   Have you ever been to a LEGO monument that is taller than any building?? The Lego Arch is the tallest monument in the Lego World! It’s on the bank of the Bionicle Beach and over 5,000 kilometers tall!
   When Johnny Thunder, an adventurer with brown clothes, got to the Arch in Extreme Island, John could not believe his eyes. The color of the Lego Arch is actually brown, but if you look from it far away, it looks like Colors of the rainbow! As John walked inside the building, he saw animated figures who told the story about the Alpha Team. Then, he heard tour guides singing. They sang so well that All Lego Men were all singing together. He also saw a variety of tools that were used by Mars ago.
John took a trip to the top of the Lego Arch in Mars Mission vehicle. It went up like a zigzag, and it made him very dizzy. After he got to the top, he saw the Aqua Raider Ship which took Lego Men to eyesight the knight's Kingdom.
   The Lego Arch was a wonderful place that no one would forget it. If you ever have a chance in Legoworld, don’t forget to visit the world's tallest monument. 

oh for 2nd stoy prizes i want any 5 (different but must have turtle and snake)

It's fine.

i want to write a new story

One day i met an only-head man
his name is echo--- how strange names ran
he told me to give him a fruit to eat
an apple, to be exact, to get a treat

I don't know what he meant. then i met farmer john
I helped him plowed; i cleaned the lawn
he gave me some apples for my work
he also gave me a very special fork

I gave the apple to echo. HE gave me something great
i got the apple pie blueprint! i bet that costs 8
to thank farmer john, i made the apple pie
he gave me the Crimson apple blueprint. Wee Hi!

I don't know wht athat it. i made in anyway
i became renk one! in an unexpected way

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“An-tue-oneee-ah-ho-ho-ho-ho, an-tue-oneee-ah-ho-ho-ho-ho, an-tue-oneee-ah-ho-ho-ho-ho, an-tue-oneee-ah-ho-ho-ho-ho, an-tue-oneee-ah-ho-ho-ho-ho-HU!”
“My gosh!” I thought, “are they still at it?!”
Sorry if that wasn’t a proper introduction. My name is Dolill. My mom is Hehewuti and my dad is Vihow. My Mom, Dad, and Achaki, the medicine man, are still at it, practicing their ancient Indian rituals. I can’t believe they still do those things! My ancestors did them years age to bring peace, but all they bring now is a headache to my head.
   .We would be a lot better off if we had just followed Hokee’s advice about putting a wi-fi transmitter in the totem pole so we didn’t have to do all this fancy stuff to do something-or-another with the totem pole.
   You might wonder what the wi-fi transmitter would be for. Well, most people don’t know that we put rocks with carvings in the inside of the totem pole. I know, it seems mad. I think so, too.
   “Dolill,” My mom interrupted, “Have you cleaned your room yet? He’s is coming to dinner tonight!”
   .“Yes, Mom!” I replied.
Why does she even ask me that? I always clean up my in the morning. Anyway, Acahaki comes to dinner every night, so I really don’t know why she wants me to clean up my room. It’s not as if we’re eating dinner in my room.
   “We really need to make a great impression, to show him our respect for him and his idea!” my Mom said, not yet finished.
   .“What?!” I replied. Acahaki’s new idea was to make an even bigger totem pole!
   “Acahaki’s coming to dinner, too, you know,” she said.
   “Wait, I thought Acahaki was the other person coming? Is the other person Kotori?” I asked, completely bewildered now.
   “No,” my mom said, and then, more thoughtfully, “but thanks for reminding me. He’s coming, too.”
   .“Wait,” I said, even more bewildered than I believed possible, “If Kotori and Acahaki aren’t the guest, then who is?”
   My mom looked surprised. “I thought you would have guessed it already!” se said. “The guest is…Hokee! We’ve decided to use his idea for the totem pole, so everyone agrees that he should come back!”
My mind was spinning. I couldn’t believe it! Hokee was coming back! For a minute, I just stood there, my mouth open in shock.
   .“You’re…you’re letting him come back?” I managed to say, still in a state of shock.
   “Why, yes Dolill, why, is there something wrong with that?” my mom said surprised. She knew that I wanted Hokee back soooo bad, so, to me, she looked a bit confused.
   “No,” I said, “ THIS IS AWSOME!!!!!!! I CAN’T BELIVE HOKEE’S COMING BACK, I CAN’T BELIEVE IT!!!!!!!!!."
   “Are you all right Dolill?” my mom asked. My “little” outburst had been unexpected, so I probably shocked her.
   “Of course I’m okay,” I said, so happy I felt like dancing, “Its just… this took me by surprise, so… I really wasn’t expecting this.”
   Just then, the door opened, and when I looked, it seemed too good to be true! It was Hokee!

“Fire!”
   “Hold your position, men!”
   “Duck!”
   “Why not goose or chi- ahhh!”
   “Amazing,” I mused, “they still don’t get it, even after 5 years.” Sorry. I should explain. My name is Wallace Wizard. I’m the old wizard you might have heard about who lives in the rickety tower on the hill between the castles.
There should only be one castle, but the king’s son, Prince Pelle, and his daughter, Princess Cynthia, are fighting for the throne. The want it all to themselves, and won’t agree to share it. So, instead of agreeing on something, they use was as their solution.
   “Mr. Wallace,” gasped a messenger for Prince Pelle. He looked like he had just run up the stairs of my tower – and he, in fact, just did, “The honorable Prince Pelle would like to speak with you.”
   “Very well,” I said, “Bring him in.”  Prince Pelle entered, looking like he hadn’t slept in weeks.
   “Sorry for my ragged appearance,” he started, “I haven’t slept days due to this little skirmish.
“Phaa,” I thought to myself, “If that as a skirmish, I’d hate to see what a full-on battle would look like.” But I didn’t say that. What I did say, however, was:
   “No matter, no matter. Now, what have you come to see me for?”
   “Well, with your permission,” Prince Pelle began, “ I would like to use your tower as a lookout post to spy on those sneaking Gauntlets!”
   “Sure,” I thought to myself, “once I see pigs fly.” But, again, I didn’t say that. Instead I said:
   “I’ll consider it. Now, if you will please leave me, I have work to do.”
   “Of course, of course.” Prince Pelle said politely. He and his messenger left the room, the messenger still gasping for breath.
   “Confounded war,” I mumbled to myself once they had left. But no later had they left my room, when a Gauntlets messenger ran into the room.
Mr. Wallace,” gasped a messenger for Princess Cynthia. He looked like he had just run up the stairs of my tower – and he, in fact, just did, “The honorable Princess Cynthia would like to speak with you.”
   “Very well,” I said, “Bring her in.”  Princess Cynthia entered, looking like she hadn’t slept in weeks.
   “Sorry for my ragged appearance,” she started,” I haven’t slept days due to this little skirmish.
“Phaa,” I thought to myself, “If that as a skirmish, I’d hate to see what a full-on battle would look like.” But I didn’t say that. What I did say, however, was:
   “No matter, no matter. Now, what have you come to see me for?”
   “Well, with your permission,” Princess Cynthia began, “ I would like to use your tower as a lookout post to spy on those sneaking Mantles!”
   “Sure,” I thought to myself, “once I see pigs fly.” But, again, I didn’t say that. Instead I said:
   “I’ll consider it. Now, if you will please leave me, I have work to do.”
   “Of course, of course.” Princess Cynthia said politely. She and her messenger left the room, the messenger still gasping for breath.
Oh, boy.
   Now, instead of considering if I should let Prince Pelle use my tower or not, I had to decide it I wanted to have Prince Pelle use my tower, if Princess Cynthia should use my tower, or if none of them should use my tower, and risk losing my friendship with either of them, or both for that matter. Whew. That’s a lot of stuff to decide!
   I thought and thought and thought and thought and thought, until thinking about thought hurt my thinker (my brain). I almost made up my mind, but then I heard a deafening ROAR! I looked out my window and saw some dragons attempting to fight some Stone Golems. And then the cries of war started up again.
“Come on, dragons, you can do this!”
“ROAR!”
“I slay dragon!”
“Good job, stone golems!”
   The war cries continued all afternoon, and then into the night, and then the next day.
   Once the battle, or, as they called it, skirmish, was over, they both came to me at the same time and asked, again, if they could use my tower as a watchtower. But, since they came together, they got in a big fight over who would get to use the tower. And their fight wasn’t one of those shove-a-thons or small fights. I have a feeling that if I didn’t stop them, they would have dueled right then and there.
   “Now, sit down and tell me why you won’t cooperate!” I demanded.
   Prince Pelle glared at Princess Cynthia, “I am the rightful owner to the throne! I deserve to be king!”
   Princess Cynthia returned the glare send from Prince Pelle, “No, I deserve to be Queen! You are not the rightful heir to the throne, I am!”
   I sighed, “You two are making not only my life, but everyone else’s in the kingdom difficult! If you can’t find a solution in the next 5 minutes, I’m going to turn you both into little pink bunnies and ship you to Mata Nui!
   “Wait a second,” Prince Pelle said puzzled, “I thought this was MLN, not Bionicle?”
   “That’s not the point!” I snapped, “Now get back to the story!”
   “Ok,” they both said in unison.
   “Now, where were we?” I asked myself, “Ah, yes, I remember now. So why don’t you two build the tower of many shields to protect and rule the kingdom together?”
   Prince Pelle glanced at Princess Cynthia nervously, “Ummm… good question. Why don’t we, Cynthia?
   “Ummm…” she said, “That’s an even better question. Why don’t we?”
   I helped them out, “Because you two are too busy fighting to work out a peaceful solution, right?” I guessed.
“Umm…” Princess Cynthia began.
“Yeah, I guess so,” Prince Pelle said.
“So…” I spurred them on again.
“ Lets work together and build it!” Princess Cynthia.
“Yeah!” Prince Pelle agreed, almost shouting.
“But how will we get all the bricks we need?” Princess Cynthia asked.
“The Transmutilation pools,” I filled in helpfully.
“Yeah!” They both said in unison.
So they started on the project, and within a few months, it was completed. So they ruled the kingdom peacefully and did so until their death.

   One day, king Arthur called his kids Cynthia and Pelle. "Good Morning, my mighty kids. I suppose you are old enough to have your own armies. Which ones would you like?" Both of the kids were very exicted.
   "I would like the be leader of the one with the Glove on it. It's so cool!" replied Princess Cynthia. "It's black, which is the color i love."
   "Father, I would take the One with the white hood." Prince Pelle seemed desperate of getting leadership of the team.
   "Good, kids. Your decisions are very smart. Cynthia, your army is called the guantlets. Pelle, your army is the Mantles. Now go out there and fight Mega Land and K-nex!"
   "Long live the king!" shouted everyone int the palace. "Long live teh knigdom of Legoland!"

   A few months passed. Both Cynthia's and Pelle's army didn't win and battles. They were too weak. On a day they met, they had a plan.
   "How about working together?" Asked the smart princess. "That way we can win."
   "Great idea! Why didn't I think of that?" Prince Pelle felt dumb. "Now let's make a plan. The Strong Men, who are our Pall Wall, Nadeem Knod, Manny Armsand yuor Jorn Knuse, Siege sunder, and Miokoko will be in the front. The other people, teh bowmen, pikemen, teh knights, and the animals teh stone golem and teh dragon, and the people with catapults will defend at teh back. That way we can win."
   The fight began. TEh K-nex and teh MEgabloks united as a team. "Shoo........" "Shoo..........." "Shoo......." big rocks and bows flew as they hit mega land adn teh K-nex. Soon teh other countries are deafted.
    A big problem came. K-nex is much larger than Megabloks land. Who will rule each part? The children are fighting over fro teh land.
   "It's my idea, so i should get teh K-nex land!"Shouted Cynthia. She was really angry, red in teh face.
   "If it weren't for my catapults you woudln't win either!" Prince Pelle was more frustrated than his sister.

    The king quickly saw the problem. He was really disappointed. He couldn't sleep. He didn't want to eat. At last, he knew what to do.
    "Kids, I cannot stand this. I will disappear until the fight si over. I wish yuo can stop fighting."
    "but father...."
    A few days passed. Teh king has dissapeared. The kids are really sad, but they still kept fighting..even now.

I'll enter, but can I post it tonight or tomorrow? My story is on my mom's laptop.

Well since star wars is a lego theme this should work:
Star Wars Mini Series:
Chapter 1:
Shortly after the Battle Of Geinosis, Commander Cody led an attack over Rhen Var. Commander Cody continued flying his V-Wing bomber that he had managed to escape in when a radio transmission came him from one of the troop landers. �Commander, we are requesting permission to land the transport on Rhen Var," said a clone.
"Permission granted Lieutenant!" the commander replied. "Land her as close to the Confederate camp as possible."
"Yes, Sir!" the clone said back.  The Lt guided the transport into the atmosphere and began to land the Acclamator I-class transport ship near the believed location of the seperatist camp. When he saw how unbelivbly cold the place locked he was surprised. Not what he'd expected. Soon the transport landed and the Lieutenant watched as the thousands of clones marched out into the cold, rough terrain. The planet was covered in ruins as if a previous people had lived here.
Meanwhile a clone named Sergeant Lister by the Kaminoians, marched with his squadron. He heard a crunching sound as he stepped into the ice. There he gathered his squadron of clones and greeted them, "Alright clones, here's our mission plan. We are going to fly in a LAAT to the droid camp where we believe Count Dooku is keeping our fellow clones and Kaminoans hostage. Count Dooku has deployed several full cruisers of droids. We will go in and resuce the hostages. Does everybody understand?"
The rest of the squad replied "Sir, Yes Sir".

Nearby Commander Cody landed his V-wing near the transport ship and headed inside to command the troops. He ordered 30 ATTEs, 12,000 clones, 70 LAAT gun ships, and 3 SPHA walkers to be used in the assault on the camp. He would have the gun ships clear air defense protecting the base while the ground vehicles would clear the bridge to make a path to the camp.

Sergeant Lister's squad boarded the LAAT and headed to the base. Down below he saw the Clones and Separatists in a heated battle. Smoke filled the air as hail fire droid fired missiles at incoming Clone Armor. Battle droids and super battle droids began to fight the infantry. Suddently Commander Cody began talking to him and his fellow clones over an intercom. "Clones, there has been a change plans. We need you and the other LAAT's take out the incoming Separatist fighters."
After the transmission Lister told his clones, "All right you heard the man. To your battle stations!"

The lieutenant watched as smoke and laser fire filled the air. The bridge was large enough for 7 AT-TE's and  300 Clones to stand in front     and meet the enemy face to face. He felt safe in the transport, that was now being guarded by the remaining 4,000 clones and several AT-TE's that had stayed behind.

In the meantime another clone sergeant led his squad on an attack on the incoming Hailfire droids and AAT's. Fireteam Alpha had managed to destroy nearby droidekas and super battle droids that were attempting to kill infantry. Soon after a clone with a rocket launcher destroyed two more AAT's and the AT-TE's destroyed 5 more making the Separatists begin to retreat. The clone sergeant and thousands of other clones pushed forward to cross the bridge. Suddenly the bridge broke in half taking down 17 of the remaining 30 AT-TE�s along with several thousand troops. The sergeant fell down into the rocky ice, never to be heard from again.

Commander Cody watched in surprise and sadness as his troops died. This was so unexpected. He now orded all of the gun ships to fire at the Separatist forces below and then drop there clones and fly back to get more. No more wasting time on the fighters that were now retreating. This plan would work he knew it.

Sergeant Lister's LAAT gunship shook as it took enemy fire and when down crashing into the camp with a bang. He and his squadron took out the blaster rifles and prepared for what waited for them outside. They stepped out of the crashed gun ship and saw that 6 droidekas waited in a circle around them all ready to fire.

The Lt was watching from the bridge of the ship when one of the clones that stayed behind came up and said "Lieutenant, Commander Cody would like to speak with you. He'll be here any minute."
"Thank you," He replied. The clone nodded back and left the bridge. Shortly after Commander Cody came back into the room. The Lt saluted the commander as he walked into the room.   "Lieutenant, you have done well," said Cody "Therefore I am putting you in charge of our remaining forces. Unfortunately I will not be here. I have just been ordered to command remaining space forces in orbit above due to an incoming Separatist fleet. I trust you with this mission. I know you'll do well." Commander Cody then left the bridge and flew away on his stolen V-Wing.

Sergeant Lister shouted at his men ordering his 9 fellow marines to fire. They opened fire with there DC-15 blaster rifles. Within several seconds one of his clones went down. "Fall back into the LAAT. There's too many!" he called out. Before one of the droidekas could activate it's shield. Luckly for him in the back of the gunship was a rocket launcher. He might just have a chance.

 This story is very simialr to a story i just read in teh past few days. if this s not accpetable, it's okay not to let me win anything.




It was the day after the lego contest millionaire. I was lucky enough to get into the contest, and I won a millionare "clicks", the currency in MYLEGONETWORKLND. i got kdinapped, by the founder of the conest. They said I cheated in the test becuase i didn't even know why crazyracrxtreme was or how to get an apple. Luckily, my best friend legodac, who is an agent, saved me. but he is also suspicous that whether if i really knew the answers to teh questions.

Question 1: Kidnapped by a pirate
Once, i went to a voyage to Italy with numb chuck. It was a stormy day. Unfortunately, we met caption jack knife on the way. HE took all our clicks and kidnapped all the people on our boat. we got to the bottom of the boat, and we sat beside lots of black pirate flags, with crossbones on it. The big storm blew the flag of the pirate ship away, so they waited until teh storm was over, which was an hour later.

"Hand me on of those Jolly Rogers," i heard jack knife commanded to one of his men. "We need a new flag." The lucky thing is, when one of the pirates came to get a flag, his knife on his waist accidentally cut off numb chuck's rope without even noticing. "Stay here or die" Grinned the pirate.

"Quick!" exclaimed Numb chuck. he helped us untie teh rope on out wiasts and hand. " we must use...use..uh...use karate to de..dee....feated the guys!" Numb Chuck seems to fall asleep.

"we need another plan," i said to my crew. "And there's onyl one way. charge."

A few minutes later, our crew shouted " charge!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" and bumped into all teh pirates, all of them falling into the sea, including jack knife! The bad news is, all our treasure also fell into the big, blue sea.

"Hmm" said legodac. "Very interlesting story." Let's see what the question was in the contest. He recorded the programme and put in the DVD. he pressed play.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"GOod morning ladies adn genbtle, it's  today's teh lego contest millionaire! today,  we have lionytai, obiwan, and lordvaderrulexz to annswer teh questions.  Olright lionytai, are you ready for the first Klestion?"

"yes, i'm ready"

"good. here's the first Klestion. What do you call a black pirate flag with  a skull and sabers or crossbones on it? is it

a. Rolly Joger
b.bolly barger
c. Jolly roger
or
d. Rolly Rocker"


"c, Jolly Roger."

"Are yuo sure, lionytai?"

"Yes, zero pecent unsure."

dun dun dun dun

"Correct! you just won 1000 clicks!"
~~~~~~~~~~~

Who won?

Question 2--what's that (s)word?

I am a knight befor egoing with Numb chuck. I served for the king of britian, in the castle where king george IV once ruled.
Teh army od the wizards came. THEy betaed us and took the "Jewelled Sowrd of Offering" ,th eking's favorite. HE begged me to fight him. i Couldn't so i ran away to the woods.
I met this guy called numb chuck. I asked him for help, and he taught me karate and kongfu.
I came back, the village filled with fear. I ran into the Wizards' army adn used my extra-extremely-very-really-no more-special attack. Cannon Ball. All teh wizards die and i go tthe sword.
as i handed back the sword to th knig, i notice the words: Gorge IV.



"Hum, not as good as last time," said legodac
"perhaps we continue.."
"absoultely"
Lego dac  pressed play.

~~~
"Now lionytai,  if you answer this klestion right you win 2000 clicks. if you answer incollectly, yuo lose evlerything. GEt it?"

"yes"

"here'sd the 2nd question... What is king george IV's famous sword called? Is it

a. Beloved one
b. The Jewelled Sword of Offering
c. The Diamonded Sword of Offering
or
d. The golden Sword of Offering"

"b. The Jewelled Sword of Offering", i said.

"Are yuo sure, lionytai? Rember that if you answer this klestion right you win 2000 clicks, and if you answer incollectly, yuo lose evlerything."

"Yes, very very sure."

dun dun dun dun

"Correct! you just won 2000 clicks!"

~~~~

Question 3: Help with Buildings

I was only 12. The cruel and stupid government forced me to become a builder, and I had no other choice. My parents died in a fire. This time, my friends, uraw911 and m13, had another mission. We had to build a building that is the tallest in MYLEGONETWORKLAND --- a model of the Empire State Building. What we build with, of course, are Lego bricks and paint. Each brick's height represents an inch. Between two stories we need to color some part of the bricks black, but only a width same as a plate. They gave us nothing but bricks and paint-- no information about how tall the Empire State Building, how many stories it has. They told us to make the base a square, so the first layer of bricks is easy to build.
Now the problem is, we need to find out the height and how many stories it had. We couldn't go out in the day time, so we sneaked out at night. We went to the library. It is 1454 feet tall and it had 102 stories in all. 1454 feet meant that there were 17448 inches, which will take a lot of our bricks. We finished building after 3 years, and we were retired because the great work we made.



"Oh, you must be really angry at the government, right, lionytai?" asked legodac curiously.
"Well, we enjoyed it really. We loved building," I replied. "Should we continue on the show?"
"I guess so."
~~~
"Good job lionytai, you've answered two klestions. Here's the third one:
How tall is the Empire Building? Is it:
a. 1234 ft
b. 19485 inches
c. 1454 inches
or
d. 17448 inches

"D, 17448 inches." I replied. "I am sure, and don't ask that question."

"Alright, I'll skip it," said the boss. After a few seconds he started talking again. "Congrats! You just won 3500 clicks!"

Question 4 Soccer=sucker?
I was 12 at this time. It was on a Wednesday, when PE class, or physical education, took place. I hate Wednesdays because, well, for a really bad reason, we had to learn all about soccer, the history of it. Our classmates like to joke soccer with "Sucker" because they have the same meaning.
Oh well, if you don't know what I mean, then you might be English. Soccer is the American word for "Football".
We took out our textbooks. The teacher read, "Soccer was first recorded playing in England, which was a place in Europe. It was in 217 AD. The rules were also..." Then a big fire ran all over the town! All of us panicked and ran out of town as fast a swe could. Only m13, uraw, and I survived because we accidentally tripped over soccer balls and we rolled out of town. We never hated soccer again.

"Let's Resume to the video," said Legodac.
"Sure," I replied.
~~~
"Good Going, and let's get to the next klestion, " said the boss nervously. "When was soccer first recorded playing? Is it
A: 217 BC
B: 1217 BC
C: 1217 AD
or
D. 217 AD"
"D," I replied.
"Are you 100% sure?"
"Um Huh," I shouted.
"You just won 10000 clicks!"

NO one enters!!!!!(just testing this [i meant the no one entered one] time if any enters)
OH well, it's just hard wark, Only I would try to enter.

Question 5   The girl I loved
It started on a rainy day, the day before my 20th birthday. I went to the Lego departement store to avoid getting wet by the rain. As I walked in, I saw the new star wars set, and then the agori, and I found the bargain I could neve imangine! The largest lego set ever for only 100 USD on sale! I took one and went to the clerk. Once I saw the clerk I was amazed! She was the custest woman I've ever seen in my whole life!She was about my age I think.
"Hi, it's a rainy day isn't it?" She said in a voice I couldn't resist. "Why don't we check out now?"
"Oh, yes, Surely" I said shyly. I was in love.
All of a sudden, she put her hands under my checks, as if she was my girlfriend. "You are a really cute guy." The most attratice woman in the world to me said. "Why not come to my house for dinner tonight?"
"Sure," I said, again, in a shy voice. "Where do you live?"
"Oh, you silly little boy, you don't know proffessor Brickkeeper, do you?"
"Oh course I know...you're his daughter?"
"Yes, my sweetheart. Let's meet at 6."
"Sure, sure." That was only what I could say. "Anyway, here's 100 dollars."
"Goodbye, little boy."
"uh.. bye."

IT was 5:50. I drove to Prof Brickkeeper's flat. The girl was standing in front of the door.
"Hi," she started. "You've rembembered me!"
"Yes, how could I ever forget about you? You're the cutest girl I've ever met in my whole life!"
At that time, her lips came very very close, I meant EXTREMELY close, to mine. I backed off, ran into the flat, and tripped, lying on the floor. She closed the door and jumped on me.
"Help!" I cried. But no one could outside. It was the professer's daughter's house, so everything was eletronic.
"Wow, is this amazing!" I cried at the walls with the neon-like lights, after I got up.
"Yes, It's the prof's invention. " She said with a smile. THe proffesser lives accross the street."
"ISn't this dog the prof's?" i asked. A grey dog was whipping his tail at me. "What;s his name?"
"Oh, yes, it's the prof's dog. He's called MUTT. Everyone voted for it." After that, she grabbed my arm, took me into her bed room, took off her clothes, and she took off mine too, and we kissed and did the thing you know, under a blanket. We completely forgot about dinner.


"Uh.. it must have....been very..... embarrassing.... right?" asked Legodac.
"Actually, yes," I replied.
~~~
"Now linoytai, it's the 5th question now, " said the boss nervously. "Who is Proffesser BRickkeeper's dog? Is it
A: DOG
B: MUTT
C: PUP
or
D. ROBO
"B," I replied.
"Are you 100% sure?"
"Um Huh," I shouted.
"You just won 25000 clicks!"

~~~~~~~~~~~

(don't forget i'm still a miunifig)

             "Ring!" the alarm went off in my bedroom as I, a secret goverment agent, got up an early morning in Lego City.  I went into my closet put on my jacket, grabbed my gun, and headed out the door of my apartment. I walked down the rainy streets of lego city untill I reached the "Brick Bistro". I walked inside the building orded a coffee and sat down. I watched tv. They were showing a rerun of some show when suddently a breaking news report popped up on the screen.
"Good morning this LordVaderRulez with a breaking news report." said the reporter "Goverments officials have just been notified that a cargo ship off of lego city has been taken over by a group know as the "Inferno". Lego coast guard crews are scrambling to stop the inferno henchmen from taking over the ship, but the coastguard appears to be out numbered. We will keep you updated on this story as it happens."
Just right after that my phone went off, I picked up and flipped open phone so I could see the screen. It was my boss.
"I suppose you've heard what's happened at sea?"
"Yes I have." I repplied.
"Good. I'm going to need you to take out those inferno leaders. DO you think you will be able to do it?"
"Of course, sir" I said. "I'll just need a crew to help  me."
"I'll take our of that. Just meet me at the seaport around sevenish." My boss said. "Just make sure know one's with you."

Question 6 The glatorian arena


I was really lucky on this question, you know. The answer was what just happened the day before the contest. The arena, the glatorian arena , had finally come out! I waited so long that i almost died!
I was the 1734865346th in line. We had to put on glatorian costumes ans fight wit real ones. The peopel in front of me all failed, so it was my turn. I ran into the court, slashed gresh, boiled tarix, cooled down malum, melted strakk, burnt vorox, and heavy slammed skrall. i was the  first to beat all thje glatorians

"Unbielive able!" cried Legodac. "To the DVD."
~~~
"Are you smart, lionytai. Here's the next question. Ths will be a very easy one, if you are fashionable.
Question 6: who is the last glaotrian you beat at the glatorian arena?
is it
A    skrall
B   strakk
C    vorox
or
D    gresh?"

"A," I replied.

"Congrats! yuo have just won 50000

I'll enter. BTW legodac,its very nice of you to hold these contests with such great prizes.

Lego Universe-in trouble

"Lego Universe Under Attack!" Screams the news headline for June 1st. It was ultimatly true. A barrage of explosives was being launched on the city. It was unknown who made them,or where they were coming from. They just....came. From all around. Blowing up this and that. The city's Army Supreme General had planned to stop these explosives with explosives that the city owned. 15 seconds later he was blown up.

Professor Brickkeeper was getting anxious. With the army General gone,he was considered the only one who could save the city. "Why me," He thought. "Why do i,the semi-insane professor and lego builder,have to be responsible for this? I don't even know where to start. What if i fail-wait a minute! Of course! i just need to calculate WHERE the blombs are coming from,and we can stop them from there!"

6 Hours later,the professor had figured out the bombs were being generated from a computer-based macro,and could not be stopped. As it turns out,it was programmers causing this. "Maybe we can make a big sign,one that says "Stop blowing us up!"! Yeah! That might work!" So the citizens of Lego Universe do just that. Minutes later,a cement block of lego falls from the sky. It lands on Captain Jack Knife,and says "We were aiming for Jack all along. he said his firepower was better than anyone else's. I don't think he believes that now". Once again,all is well with Lego Universe. Hooray!

The End.

 

Question 7 First Meeting with Legodac

It was the first time I got to a meeting, which was about 10 days ago. I was the representative of the Numb Chuck society, to talk all about MLN and the improvements. I got up, ate a honey pie quickly, and dashed to the building where the meeting will be held. The clock stroke 8, and people could start going into the building to attend the meeting.

I recognized a few people as soon I sat down. The opposite side of me was timposter. Next to him was Crazy Racr Xtreme, and the other side of Tim was MsRedRowdyhead. Next to me was a spare seat, and the other side was Uraw911. HQuiff was next to uraw. Only about 10 people are attending the meeting.
Suddenly, a person sat right next to me. He was almost 50 years old I think, with glasses on. The meeting starts at 10. We began to chat and gossip.
“Hi!” the stranger said, “You must be lionytai! Nice to meet you.”
“Nice to meet you too, but who are you? And how do you know my name?” I was very curious
“Name’s Legodac,” the man said. “You have outstanding music performances! I just got your newest hit!”
“Oh, I see,” I said. “You’re the famous Legodac! Your hits rock too!”
“Thanks, how’s it going these days?” Legodac asked me.
“Aye, business is good. Can you imagine? 90 orders in one month!”
…………….
Soon it was 10. A familiar looking man walked up the stage.
“Good morning, ladies and gentlemen,” the man said. “My name is Grok. I am from outer space.” Now I get it! Only people that are rank 10, who are my only friends, can join the meeting!
“I am here today to discuss about improvements for the very successful MLN. Now I will help everyone know each other. Sitting next to me is Crazy Racr Xtreme, followed by timposter, MsRedRowdyHead, and  Plotkin. On the other side are HQuiff, Uraw911, lionytai, and finally Legodac. I welcome you all the the meeting.”
“Nice to meet you!” “Howdy!” “Hi!” was all I heard. Soon it was 10:30 after the introduction.
“Okay,” said Grok, trying to settle things down. “Let’s start the meeting. First, we’ll talk about the dupers.”
“Oh man, the dupers, I just hate’m,” said MsRR. “They are no good for the Network.”
“I agree,” said Legodac. “We need to have a bricker future.”
“Then how do we stop dupers?” I asked. “Some people’s dupes’ name are not similar to their usernames.”
“That’s the point of the meeting,” added Tim. “We have to find out who the dupes are.”
“But we can’t find out by anyway,” HQuiff said. “We users can’t use the IP address to find dupes, can we, Grok?”
“No, we can’t,” Grok replied. “CRX, what do you think?”
“Aye, there may be one way to find out. If you suspect it’s a dupe, try to befriend it. If the account accepts, ask him to click your page. But this way is not very clever, though.” CRX said
“Exactly. Not a very clever way. Well, remember what he used to identify some dupes? The thornax module. Making one is extremely cheap. Just a few red bricks.” Plotkin added. I didn’t feel good at the meeting.
“Oh, there’s another way. The message boards!” I cried.
“Oh yes, we would we forget about it? Sometimes the name will not change when you log out and change accounts. Like if a rank 1 said that he has 30 CSU for sale, it must be a dupe.” Uraw explained.
“One more thing,” Legodac added. “Lionytai told me that to his experience, most dupers do not post in the LMBs.”
“But how about empire981?” MsRR asked. “He has the most posts but he once mentioned that he had an army of dupes.”
“Pandobikini3 doesn’t post in the LMBs,” HQuiff said. “I am an active poster at the LMBs.”
Suddenly, a person ran into the meeting. "Breaking news! All dupe's accounts have been destroyed!"
"Hooray!" Everyone shouted. The meeting has ended.
"Oh yeah... I remember about the meeting. But what does it have to do you’re your question?" Legodac said. He pressed play
~~~
"Great job, lionytai. Now you enter question. Here's the question: who was the chairman of the dupe-destroyers meeting? Was it
A. PAL
B. Terpi
C. Grok
Or
D. the reckling?"
"C," I replied.
"Are you 100% sure?"
"Yes!"
"Correct. Lionytai has won 100000 clicks!"
~~~

     I arrived at the seaport at around sevenish. The rain was pouring hard and it darkened the empty night sky. I continued walking around curisouly looking for my boss when suddently someone in a tuxedo grabbed me from inside a warehouse.
"Pow!" I fired my gun. "Put the gun down!' said the person. I recognised his voice, it was my boss.
"Wow!" I said. "You scared the brick out of me. What was that for?"
"I wanted to make sure no one saw you here," said the boss. "But that didn't work out to well."
I have to say, I wasn't to surprised he grabbed me like that. The Boss, as we refer, to him is mysterious, calm, yet clever man.

"Anyway let's get this mission briefing going." Boss.
I heard footsteps and looked behind me and saw three people walk up. The first one was familiar, Agent Tom, from the goverment. The next two didn't look as familir. They were coast guard agents and boy, they looked tough.
"Who are these two guys" I whisoered to Agent Tom, a young african american man.
"Some special operatives troops from the coast guard." he said, I'm not quite sure why they are here.
"Gentlemen!" the boss yelled. "This is not time for chit-chatter. We have a serious problem on our hands. Agent M set up the screen."
Agent M was a CIA agent who specialised in technology. He walked behind the boss and put up a screen showing a diagram of a ship.
The boss continued, "At approximently 5:45 this morning, inferno forces seized a trading vessel off the shores of Lego City. The ship contains over 5.2 billion studs of supplies. If the ship were to be succesfully taken over by the infernos they could use the money for horrifing reasons. That's why I have selected you four to take back the ship. He pointed at the four of us sitting down.

"Our plan goes the following. The two coast guard troops will enter with a squad via helicopter onto the deck of the ship. They will create a distraction, which will then allow for the two agents to enter underwater. After fighting with inferno forces, the remaing coast guard troops will meet with agents at the center of ship, which is the lcoation of the supplies, and the Inferno leader."

Question 8 Lego Racing Challenge

It was the most exciting day of all. Actually, the second most exciting of all. (The most exciting day was the day when the Glatorian Arena Game came out.) The Lego Racing Challenge on-line computer game was out for a few weeks, which I have expected so long. I missed the old "DRC" a few years ago. At first I didn't know what DRC meant.

As most of you people know, not a lot of people are online when I am online, for that I live Taiwan, a country just off the coast of China. I was waiting for someone to get online to race. Just one more winning race and I'm going to be class W!

Suddenly, a familiar name came out on the list of the glacier track. I couldn't remember where I saw that name before, but the name of 1mak07 surely rings a bell!

The race has begun. Now knew what the problem was! I've forgot to turn the starting run from green to red! I've knew I've forgotten something. 1mak07, immediately, was 3 meters ahead of me.

The attacking time was here. 1mak07 left out large, red spikes behind him, when he was 4 meters ahead of me. I lost another meter because I didn't pass the water wheel challenge, which I lost 2 meters, but 1mak07 didn't pass the uphill challenge, which he lost 3 meters.

1mak07 had to slow down when he left out the spikes. My car jumped high enough and at the right time to avoid spikes. We were only 1 meter away from each other now.

It was my turn to attack. I used my paint spray cannon, and it hit the front of the car, making 1mak07's car out of control! I passed his car and headed towards the finish line. I have won! "Bet you won't win if you are still in the Drome Racing Challenge." 1mak07. I didn't mind. Something was more important. Class W, here I come!


"I love LRC, but DRC was better," legodac said. He pressed play.
~~~
"Great job lionytai, 3 more questions to go. Here is the 3rd last question. In Lego.com, DRC is the abbreviation of what? Is it
A.  Drome Racing Challenge
B. Devil Ranched Cookies
C. Deep-Ran Cakes
Or
D. Deer-Rabbit Crakers?"
"A," I replied.
"I couldn't believe it. Lionytai has just won 250000 clicks!"
~~~

Meca-One's Return

Here's a story I'm writing in the LMB

Many decades of peace have elapsed since the final battle which struck down the robots. The sensei was soon replaced by Ryo and under him, many things bloomed. The robot side of the mountain was soon repaired and the humans lived in peace with robots, which they took care to program correctly. However, several of the veteran warriors feel unease as a new generation of battle-machine pilots take their places. They somehow felt... that a new shadow, greater than the old, was growing... and that it would soon be revealed.

Enter Gincho, a promising pilot-in-training from a rich family on the robotic side of the mountain. His parents had requested that he join the Exo-Force in order to train him well. He was tall, young, well-built, and smart... but, his main weakness which the trainers and veterans constantly warned him of was this: he was very, very proud.

Gincho shifted in his seat, anxious to be off. Today would be the day he, and the rest of the students, went of on their second training mission. Robots would line the forest, while he and the others sneaked through and retrieved the prize. Robots were easy, he thought, the hard part was the race.

What was the race? Well, the students were to be split up into two teams and, avoiding robots - or possibly having to fight them, would race to the prize.
An instructor called for the "ready." Gincho grinned as he flipped a switch; time for a lesson in defeat.

The machines roared through the jungle. Although this was only a training mission, Gincho kept his sense alert. For although the mountain was tamed, nothing could silence this wild jungle.
He pressed the intercom button and quickly muttered, "Firebird to Thunderhawk: I see a robot. Shall I take it out or save it for the other team?"
"Thunderhawk to Firebird: kill it."
Gincho grinned. He loved action. With a soft halt, he activated his gun from his position behind the robot. But, where was the fun in that if the robot didn't fight? No, Gincho edged around and prepared to come at full force...

Another difficult one to judge, I think I may open electing and appointing judges to my contests in August. Great stories guys, I really enjoyed reading them all. If I hadn't started a shop Darth Twilight, you'd all be getting FIRST place.

Without further adue, the winners of contest #1 are as follows
  1st is Flash
  2nd is Lionytai
  3rd is LordVaderRulez

        GRATS LADS and keep em coming

                                               The legodac bi-monthly short story contest #2 BEGINS NOW

                                        Oh well, we'll try again
                                                                              The legodac bi-monthly short story contest #3 BEGINS NOW

Fire! Part One-The Flame Strikes~

Around the forum, fire is spreading like......wildfire. NO one foresaw this Tragedy, besides Jas (and everyone thought he was insane). It looks like it may be the end of the forum...

(First-Person Viewpoint ON)
FIRE! THERE'S FIRE IN THE FORUM GAMES BOARD! AND TIM'S CAR IS ON FIRE!

(Crowd)
Oh NOOO!!!! YAY!!!!

(First-Person Viewpoint)
I'll spray water on the fire! And Tim's car!

(Crowd)YAY!!! NOOOO!!!

(First-Person viewpoint)

*sprays  water on the forum games and Tim's car*

That was close. But ther'll be more fire soon....

To Be continued.

This week I didn't have time to right a stroy so I'll enter my mini star wars comics from the LMBs. There a dumb little show I did a while back. ( It includes a bunch of members too.)

Ouside LSNBC Headquarters:
Clone Trooper 2:Look, Commander Cody is sleeping. Maybe we can sneak into tha LSNBC headquarters and steal some food.
Clone Trooper 1:I am hungry. Maybe they have cheeseburgers in there!
So the 2 clone troopers walked in the building and then saw a clone sergeant and a secuirty gaurd.Clone
Sergeant:Stay right there clones. This area is for LSNBC reporters only.
Clone trooper 2:But, we're hungry. Then the first clone trooper threw a rock at the sergeant and ran in!
Security Gaurd:I'm gonna get the 2nd in charge of LSNBC and he'll be mad at you guys!


Soon the clone troopers entered the snack area:
Clone Trooper 1:Yes, there are cheeseburgers.
Clone Trooper 2: And pie.
DarthVader#: Wait a minute I'm 2nd in charge here at LSNBC and I don't think you should be in here!
Clone Trooper 2: Uh-oh
Clone trooper 1: RUN!

The clones then ran out the doors when spacedude drove by.
Spacedude: Watch out you kids! Wait a minute those are clones. Uh-oh! I'm spiraling out of control.
DarthVader#: Hey can you help me get those guys?
Spacedude: Sure thing.
Clone 1: Uh-oh there's more of them!
Clone 2: Goodthing I still have these cheeseburgers!
Clone 1: Throw them at them!
When we last left off our clone friends were being chased by DarthVader and spacedude.
Spacedude: Ahh cheeseburgers! Run!
DarthVader: Lets run over ther to that McDonalds down the street!
Spacedude: Few! We finally got away from those clonetroopers.
DarthVader: I'm starving, lets get something to eat.
The two walk over to the order counter where they see a waiter dressed as a clonetrooper.

Starwars comics continued...
Waiter: Here's your cheeseburger and complimentry clone helmet.
Random Guy: Thanks!
DarthVader# and Spacedude: CHEESEBURGERS???? CLONES??/ Run for your Lives!!
Random guy: Well that was weird.
Waiter: tell me about it.
Meanwhile the two clones are looking for DarthVader and spacedude.
Clone 2: I wonder where they are.
Clone 1: I wonder why they don't like these cheeseburgers. Clone 1 starts eating cheeseburger. Clone 2 knocks cheeseburger out of his hand.
Clone 2: Hey, we need these cheeseburgers don't eat them.
Finck Boy walks up to the clones.
Finck Boy: What are you guys doing?Aren't you supposed to be at LSNBC?
The two clones look at eachother.
Clone 1: uh..... We had to go to the bathroom!

continued
Clone 2: Yeah we had to go to bathroom!
Finck Boy: But there's a bathroom at LSNBC, plus why do you have those cheeseburgers.
Clone 2: uhh. we thought we might get hungry on the way to the bathroom.
Clone 1 looks at Clone 2 with a dsigusted face.
Finck Boy: Yeah, I'll leave you guys alone.........


 

Here's a different story; I might actually continue this one in different contests though:

 PROLOGUE:

   Boom! The catapult launched a heavy boulder into the night air. A roaring blaze of inferno met it and it was disintegrated by a fiery, red dragon. Roar! The dragon soared over the city followed by four others of different sizes and colored scales. The red Scrymger dragon led the four others onto the battlements. It glanced around and saw its fellow dragons doing well. Satisfied, it flicked its tongue out and baked a knight in armor like bread might in the oven. It glanced around then flared up two holes below its nose. Using heat-seeking abilities from its inner body chamber, it located a dragon egg’s presence. With a loud roar it launched itself of the battlement and sent several men flying. The enraged dragon crashed through a roof and met the castle’s “king.” It wondered how such a puny creature could actually try to dominate the present world. Then, his eyes caught a shiny ruby red round object. The egg! It bared two rows of hard, shining teeth at the king and flew to retrieve the egg. Little did it know however, that knights were hiding in the shadows.
         With a bark, the king ordered an attack on the dragon. The red dragon reeled in pain. Many arrows had bounced of its rough scales but a particular sharp shooter had pierced the dragon's eye. The dragon flew at the man like a tempest and within seconds, the man was ripped to shreds. But, the dragon made an even graver mistake. For while he had attacked the man, the dragon had exposed its soft underbelly to a group of archers at the other side of the round chamber. The dragon roared in pain. Several lethal arrows pinned its underbelly and throat. With a long, blazing look at the egg, it launched forward to grab its precious treasure but was stopped by rows of pike men and even more arrows from the shadows. It gave out a long miserable cry in warning to the other dragons and flew out a painted window. The dragons followed their fiery, red leader and they all soon disappeared over the horizon with catapult boulders covered in sickly oil and roaring flames following them. The boulders flew through the skies and one of the stones hit a dragon. In screaming agony, the green dragon fell to the cold, black earth. The red dragon looked back at his fellow beasts and noticed that two others had fallen to the knights in the brawl as well. In its strange, alien mind it vowed that as long as it lived it would save the egg… her egg.
 

First: Flash
Second: LVR
Third: Twilight
Well done!

Don't send me anything this week legodac. YOu've helped me enough by supplying shop items. :)

Thanks again Legodac.
Thanks to TBD for judging as well!

I think from now on, I'll alternate between this and the poem contest.

Red Sky Sqaudron
Prologue:
Some 25 years ago I was spending my time looking over some files at the local archive when I stumbled upon what appeared to be small red journal maybe of 15 years of age. As I opened it up to my amasement my grandfather along with several other names were written it. This appeared to be a war journal of some sort. I spent the rest of the day reading that journal. Now over 20 years later I tell this story. This is a story of war .

Entry One
Date: January 11th 2015
Location: 37 miles miles southwest of Kunming, Hainan, China
We have finally been given  permission for a full throttle invasion. After what they had done to the NATO troops at Sichuan the invasion seemed justified to me. The first part of our attack consisted of several bombings from a joint sqaudron of NATO and USAF planes. This attack came after the Chinese led invasion of Mongolia and former terroritory of Laos whether or not I agree with this doesn't matter much anymore.


At 12am this morning several
-Ahuv Stavi, Advanced Sergeant Major, Israeli Infantry Corps

I would like to enter.

Sorry I'm so late judging this:

Centuar, as the only entry, wins! You get 7 Totemics.

Thanks pal for judging, I love friends who are on the Brick, btw, you brickers are driving me mental with all your name changes, congrats to MLN name LVR, awesome, animals in a day or 2 (real busy eh) Friday night at the latest, barring comets crashing to earth

   Re: The legodac bi-monthly short story contest #5 HAS BEGUN   PS my best buddy wasn't late, I was, he's so cool...and to think we once butted bricks in a team called the Maniacs...

Yeah...I'm never late. Everyone else is just early.  :P

Nah, I just watch a lot of movies. I have funny parents though.

If ever you want me to judge again, legodac (or DT), feel free to ask me :).