The legodac bi-monthly poem contest #9 I'll be entering this one

[Legodac]

Here's the deal, simply write a poem about Lego or anything else you think of, all content must be original.
 Of Course all MLNO rules and regs apply.
 Contest rules and guidelines are as follows:
    Only one judge per week, to start off today, I'll be the first judge
    Other judges may apply here from week to week and will be chosen by me to select three winners.
    The contest runs from the first to the middle of the month and then the last half
    Ok, I'm gettin' there, sheesh, The prizes come from me, and don't worry, we'll get them to you wether or not you're on my friend list in MLN via the Banker Courier system.
       First prize is 3 CSU's and second is 3 totemic animals and 3rd is a lisence
Please enter as often as you like, even if we only have 2 writers here, it will be more fun with more poems
   

So this is an upgrade, for the forum fades
an example of rhyme
which took little time

I wrote just for fun
this story and pun

This morning I wrote
no thought of a vote

OK EH, give it a rest, we know your the best, OK, I'll stop, lol, LOTSA O LEGO, the following I wrote in 5 minutes playing around with a cookie that never seems to loose any crumbs, I submit this to say I'm worthy to judge

As I rise to me feet and dust myself off,
to view the carnage, disgusted I cough,
I move to my craft the one I named LUSI'
revenge is at hand it's gonna be juicy

I notice she's damaged
and look for a bandage
repair her real quick
Then get on the stick

lighting the fires
I head for the mires
I'm here at Speherus
so it's gonna get serious

low and behold he's taking a nap
with cookie in hand, it's there on his lap
snatching it quick
and just in the nick

I head for the stars, and take a lookie
I'm thinkn' outloud, ALL THIS FOR A COOKIE?

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[Jas765]

So when does this start? today?

[Legodac]

So when does this start? today?

YES JAS, it started noon MLNO time, let's here it buddy, let everyone know your creative skills know no bounds

[Obi]

I have a poem! It probablyy isn't that good, but it's a poem.

Legos are extremely fun,
You can play with them in the sun.
Or inside on a rainy day,
They're fun to play with any day
Star Wars, Castle, Agents, too.
So many themes made just for you.

Well, that's my poem.

[Jas765]

Plastic LEGO blocks
Being played with by a kid
Creating a car

It's a haiku.

[Rakoua]

Here, take a peak,
I hope my poem isn't too weak...

The Lost Brick

That brick over there,
it's age looks so severe.
Perhaps you should play
Like you used to every day?
You seem lost, touching it,
perhaps you should sit?
Take your brick,
Even if you're sick.
Go, take it, shall I say,
Here, you do it this way.
Look at it, for a moment,
And turn it into a monument,
Car, truck, house, anything...
You can even sing.
Take it, go ahead,
Don't make the plastic sad...

[Legodac]

I have a poem! It probablyy isn't that good, but it's a poem.

Legos are extremely fun,
You can play with them in the sun.
Or inside on a rainy day,
They're fun to play with any day
Star Wars, Castle, Agents, too.
So many themes made just for you.

Well, that's my poem.

Cool, I like it

A quote from jas

Plastic LEGO blocks
Being played with by a kid
Creating a car

That's the best poem ever written, it's way ahead of it's time, so far in fact, I can't find the rhyme
                                                                                     perfect in time, it is so sublime
                                                                                    so see if you won in 3009

It's going so well
I may cast a spell
on all those here now
who don't have a cow

following 5th of six with some really cool tricks
Here, take a peak,
I hope my poem isn't too weak...

The Lost Brick

That brick over there,
it's age looks so severe.
Perhaps you should play
Like you used to every day?
You seem lost, touching it,
perhaps you should sit?
Take your brick,
Even if you're sick.
Go, take it, shall I say,
Here, you do it this way.
Look at it, for a moment,
And turn it into a monument,
Car, truck, house, anything...
You can even sing.
Take it, go ahead,
Don't make the plastic sad...
                                               

That's cool too

[ab§olute_Z3R0]

Approved. Have fun.

[Legodac]

Approved. Have fun.

Thankyou Sir, I must point out to all who read here, I, went ahead with this topic on my own without prior approval and to all who are new, read the MLNO rules before hand. You'll avoid any embarassing situations, like this,
                                                 
                                               FOR Ab-Z, I am sorry and thanks again

I have modified the rules, please post as often as you like, and it gives you another chance to come out on top. This modification is also at the top (first post)

[lionytai]

I need clicks

hey  legodac
i'm in lack
of clicks on my soundtrack


Hey AB-z
please spend 3
on my very special gallery

hey anyone
have fun
as you stay
on my page
until you eat a bun

[Legodac]

Winners posted for week 1, week 2 CSU POEM contest begins NOW

[Jas765]

Where? I can't see them.
Ooh, fun. We just started a unit on poetry in english.

[Legodac]

Where? I can't see them.
Ooh, fun. We just started a unit on poetry in english.

Winners have been posted in this same forum,in another topic. However, I'm locking this topic because I think that we'll have a better contest without the rhyme and focus on creative writing and short stories, everyone loves a good story and everyone has one to tell. Even though I'd like to keep this perticular contest open, because that's what I promised, I'm closing it until I'm certain it is accepted by a few more brickers

[Jas765]

I'm not doing a haiku this week. Remember, poems don't always have to rhyme...

Have a look, it'll be quick
Take a look at that lone LEGO brick
You used to use it, night and day
But you stopped after we went to that bay
After that, you didn't give a care
You were too distracted and unaware
So, remember that lone LEGO brick
and maybe play with it when you are sick

[Legodac]

I'm not doing a haiku this week. Remember, poems don't always have to rhyme...

Have a look, it'll be quick
Take a look at that lone LEGO brick
You used to use it, night and day
But you stopped after we went to that bay
After that, you didn't give a care
You were too distracted and unaware
So, remember that lone LEGO brick
and maybe play with it when you are sick

Congrats to Jas, for a great poem, the competition was fierce, lol.

WEEKLY CSU #3 BEGINS NOW, good luck to all the dozens of contestants

[lionytai]

lego is the best,
 as you can see
nothing's better than that,
at least for me
i build and take photos
of my newly built sets
i like to build houses,
monuments and jets.
Planes are good too
nothing's bad to do
I wish everyone likes LEGO







including you.

[Obi]

Here's my poem. It kind of rhymes... and repeates.

I like LEGOs
That is true,
They're cooler than
Some brand new shoes.

I like LEGOs
Yes it's true,
That's all I have
To say to you.

Well, there it is.

[.]

here is mine it is called why i build legos i kno it is cheesy :pand awful...

i build legos b/c
i can make anything
it is something i am enjoying
i can make an army fleet
it makes me feel 133t (elite)
it inspired me to go to their site online
you can now even view a page of mine
it just feels right
and that is all i can think of to write

[MsRowdyRedhead]

I will give it a shot...

What shall we build with bricks today?
Would you like to come over and play?
There are so many things I’d like to say,
And building with Bricks is the perfect way!

My LEGO Friend you know it’s true,
I’d like to build the world with you.
There’s so many things that we could do,
With LEGO bricks, just me & you! 

[Legodac]

This one's over, next one begins now, see contest winners for last weeks winners.

WP contest #3 winners as follows
  In first place we have Lionytai, an inspiring piece of poetry to say the least
  In second place we have MsRR for her down home and original LEGO poem
  In third we have my faithfull buddy, Obi-wan, who's down to earth poetry, truly made me smile
  In 4th, an honourable mention to Wagner who doesn't know that I don't understand pc lingo yet, yet, there were a couple of glowing rhymes
Your prize is 2 gypsum, nice job.(We'll find a BC for your Prize)
  In conclusion, I'd like to something about last weeks winner, Jas765, who wrote a poem so close to my heart it made me cry. To me, he wrote about the 'Lego Dark years',something I didn't even know about until talking to a close friend, a place I once was, a place we all may find, a place you don't want to go, My only wish is that he graces us with his poetry once again.