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« Reply #80 on: September 15, 2008, 07:22:53 pm » |
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... maybe... Chapter Five is up... return to their own world is getting close  |
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« Reply #81 on: September 15, 2008, 07:28:55 pm » |
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I already read it and it is getting better by each post you make.
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« Reply #82 on: September 16, 2008, 02:50:53 pm » |
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What in the hell is going on?
My sister suggests that you should take a creative writing class.
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« Reply #83 on: September 16, 2008, 03:24:57 pm » |
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The rift is forming... but for something that will change your dimension from one to another, it takes a while...
And does your sister mean so that I can get better at my writing, or that I need to learn how to write properly?
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« Reply #84 on: September 16, 2008, 03:36:09 pm » |
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My sis saids it is extremely fun, you learn how to write even better hooks, and learn how to write better. Some teachers give you a whole class just to write.
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« Reply #85 on: September 16, 2008, 05:30:17 pm » |
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Cool! I might check it out
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« Reply #86 on: September 17, 2008, 02:16:34 pm » |
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Does your school even have a creative writing classs? if you don't know then i suggest go talking to your Guidance Counselor about if they have so you can sign up for it next year.
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« Reply #87 on: September 17, 2008, 05:17:49 pm » |
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It does, but its a grade 12 course, so I'd have to either take grade 11 english in summer school, or take the course without grade eleven knowledge :-\
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« Reply #88 on: September 17, 2008, 05:21:32 pm » |
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Creative writing is an elective. Though it is taken by mostly 12th because it is so popular.
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« Reply #89 on: September 17, 2008, 05:43:43 pm » |
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Next part is up  |
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« Reply #90 on: September 17, 2008, 05:45:49 pm » |
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I've just got done reading it. So who is Nara going to? A sorceress? Another deamon?
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« Reply #91 on: September 17, 2008, 05:56:02 pm » |
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Neither... its something else entirely...
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« Reply #92 on: September 17, 2008, 05:57:10 pm » |
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A deity!
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« Reply #93 on: September 19, 2008, 02:05:52 pm » |
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Anyways, I am confuzzled by what the 2-3 latest parts are saying.
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« Reply #94 on: September 19, 2008, 02:27:00 pm » |
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Crioone and Taverna found a dimensional gate-the rift- and as it opened, the two of them were transported back to inside of Metawar(picking up from where they were when Nara's betrayal happened).
In another spot completely, Nara escaped from a cage she had been put in by... well, I can't say what/who yet...
As for the Interlude, Exaltoskull has accepted his true destiny, and is on his way to ultimate power and becoming a Deamon Shadow
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« Reply #95 on: September 19, 2008, 02:28:29 pm » |
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Exaltoskull is becoming a reaper!
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« Reply #96 on: September 19, 2008, 03:33:02 pm » |
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Chapter six: seeking the stars is up |
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« Reply #97 on: September 20, 2008, 06:47:56 am » |
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Nara is in the desert in mud heading towards the thing.
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« Reply #98 on: September 21, 2008, 07:45:26 pm » |
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Nara is in the desert in mud heading towards the thing.
Yes, that's correct. Next part is up |
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« Reply #99 on: September 24, 2008, 02:18:57 pm » |
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I am in need of explaining. What just happened?
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