Skye: Well, the lyrics are the best parts aside from the actual music about the song anyway. It makes a little more sense(Including the range stuff) if they're all listened to in order, but on a stand-alone scale, I can kinda understand that. The piano sections are indeed the best parts of the song. =P
As for your song, I'd say it's rather good.(I'd say 8/10 if I was rating it) Though, it shares the same thing about Clocks by Coldplay: Both could be sung by The Cure, and have the question be obviously answered by listeners. =P Also, WHAT AM I FIGHTING FOOOOOOOOR!??!?!
Wagner: The voice sounds familiar almost. Can't exactly think of why though. xD Very good, though I have no clue what exactly the lyrics are about, aside from stitching someone up for some reason. Might have to listen to it again.
I say 8/10 as well, though. =) Maybe closer to the 9 scale, but both are very good songs. =D
