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« on: September 21, 2012, 07:00:27 pm »

First, I removed an inappropriate word from your post.

Second, if you played the RPG (or read it, it's still in the RPG board), you'd know what it turns into: A murder mystery.


Finally, "baka" is just Japanese for "dummy, fool, etc".
I'm learning Japanese as a second language, I know what "baka" means

My point is that when you shoehorn it into an English sentence it sounds gratuitous, forced, and frankly pretty stupid

Other than what I said though the writing quality was actually pretty good
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