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« on: November 28, 2012, 05:48:02 pm » |
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I just read Dead House, and loved it. It's very well written, even though the premise is a little bit overused. The ambiguous monster/demon in a haunted house, the description of Ezekiel, and the stunted plants are all a bit cliche. If you could've added some unique twist at the end, I believe the story would be ten times better.
But it's pretty awesome as is, and I don't even like horror stories that much.
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