Adding length is my Kryptonite. I need to work on it, but I have an instinctive aversion to adding unneeded details.
I like to think I'm getting better at it, though.
You'd make a good English student.
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http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/EveryoneIsJesusInPurgatory)
Thanks.
I tried to imply a bit that it wasn't JUST the narrator that did it, though...more that the narrator was in charge OF the killer(s)? I guess it makes more sense to me since I know who the narrator was.
You should! I'd love to read your stories.
