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That's what I was thinking. Thanks. =) *Goes to edit it in quickly* Just finished the first paragraph; it's still short, but I did expand it somewhat. I'm trying to make Owen not look as silly as he did in the first two actual chapters of the old version. Interesting, but doesn't fit his character. =P As much of the shopping part as I can remember, however, I'm not touching, though. It's more changing up reactions to show similar things, but not have it be obvious(Like Otis 'taunting' Owen by saying he's not Peter, and Owen actually introducing himself before Elaine asks in this chapter.
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