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"Mines of Doom" previews?

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« on: February 08, 2009, 01:54:27 am »

Hey, all,

I've been thinking: since the mods at the LU Creation Lab take SO long to approve new parts of my story serial "The Mines of Doom", I was wondering if you wanted to see them first!  Here's how it would work: at the same time I upload a new part or parts, I would post the script (and possibly the illustrations) here, so you can read them first!

Please let me know your opinion by voting in the poll!
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« Reply #1 on: February 21, 2009, 04:05:13 am »

Alright!  Since everyone (so far) has voted that I put up previews, here are the scripts for "Mines of Doom" Parts 18 and 19!  (I'll get the pictures up later.  Also, the archives will take a while, so please be patient.)  Feel free to comment here, as I will establish the main topics for this in the near future.  Wink

Mission 2: The Mines of Doom (Part 18)
Treecleaver, Sloopofwar, MSROWDYREDHEAD, Rgijaba, and Designerdude101 have split off from the rest of their group to try to find Treecleaver’s original entrance into the Mines of Doom. Unbeknownst to them, an epic confrontation in the treasure room will endanger them all…

1) The group walks down the side access tunnel, when…
MSRR: Did you hear something?
DD101: Like what?
MSRR: It sounded like rocks shifting…
TC: It’s probably nothing. Let’s keep moving

2) Suddenly, the tunnel floor behind them collapses, revealing a pool of lava beneath. The floor in front of them ruptures as well, and steam billows from the gap.
TC: Is it too late to take that back?

3) MSRR and DesignerDude jump the gap first, followed by Sloopofwar and Rgijaba. Before Treecleaver can jump, however, the island he stands on begins to crumble!

4) At the last second, Treecleaver makes a huge leap, barely making it to the other side. He nearly falls backwards into the lava, but Sloopofwar manages to grab the very end of his beard.
TC: Not the beard!

5) Sloopofwar pulls Treecleaver back to safe ground, and the party moves a short distance away from the lava pool. Everyone stops to rest, but before they can catch their breath…
Rgijaba: YOW!! Hot, hot, HOT!
Sloopofwar: Here we go again…

To Be Continued!


Mission 2: The Mines of Doom (Part 19)
Just moments ago, Treecleaver and his group split off from the rest of the team, who stayed behind in the treasure room of the Mines of Doom.  Now that Luna Miyalu has reappeared, however, they’re starting to wish that Treecleaver’s party had stayed…

1) As one, the NPCs prepare themselves for battle.
Ike: Ike of the Greil Mercenaries. You don't look too good. Maybe you should just leave...
Luna: Hardly!  I am the greatest sorceress this universe has ever known, and with the power of the Great Controller, I will be truly invincible!
Ike: Whoa! So you're a mage, are you?
Luna: Silence! Once the Controller is mine, I’ll teach you some respect!
Ike: Sorry, but at this point, I don't think you're in a position to teach me anything. You power-seekers are all the same. From the very beginning, every last one of you has underestimated us. Will you never learn? Your refusal to recognize our strength will forever keep victory at arm's length.
While Ike distracts Luna, Flipz charges up his Plasma Hand for a Plasma Storm, but before he can fully charge the move, TigerBurrell opens fire on Luna with his Proro-Crystal Scatterbeams!  Startled, Flipz releases his blast, but he misses!
Before anyone else can react, the NPCs leap into action!  But with a sweep of her armored hand…

2)…Luna turns them into trophies!
Luna: Foolish mortals!  I wield the power of the darkness!  You will all fall before my might!
Luna’s hand starts to glow, and she points at Flipz…

3) …when Matchoupatchou#1 uses his plasma whip to force her hand up!  Luna’s blast hits the ceiling, sending cracks racing down the tunnel and causing the entire chamber to shake.
DudeMan565: Wait…I thought that was just a torch!
LegoAlienGuy894: Me too!
Beeky31: You are full of surprises, Match!

4) Enraged, Luna slams Match, LAG894, TB, and Flash21704 with a massive blast of energy that sends them flying across the abyss!  DudeMan unlimbers his sword to retaliate, but…
Beeky31: Stay your blade!  Ordinary weapons are of no more use here!
Flipz: This foe is beyond any of us. Run!
MaraJade312 grabs the Great Controller with the Force, and everyone flees across the bridge.

5) As Luna pursues the heroes, Beeky suddenly realizes what he must do. As the others reach safety on the other side of the chasm, Beeky turns to face his foe.
Beeky: That’s far enough, Luna.  You cannot pass!

To Be Continued!
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