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« on: October 06, 2009, 01:54:17 pm » |
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« Reply #1 on: October 10, 2009, 03:39:57 am » |
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I've only read The Beginning of the End so far, but I thought it was very well done. I'll have to read the rest!
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I'm back. Probably not for long, as I've got school stuff to attend to, and I'll probably want to get a job at some point (hopefully self-employed). But nice to see you all again anyway.
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« Reply #2 on: October 10, 2009, 02:43:52 pm » |
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Both pretty cool; not bad for short excerpts but unfortunately, I could only view two of them :-\ Agh, now I'm hanging in suspense  |
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« Reply #3 on: October 10, 2009, 02:52:47 pm » |
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Which ones didn't work?
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« Reply #4 on: November 02, 2009, 02:12:28 pm » |
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Whoops; forgot about this topic :-[ The ones in the middle didn't work. PS- Actually, it's good I forgot since this topic was getting old  |
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« Reply #5 on: November 02, 2009, 02:15:42 pm » |
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Strange... I'll have to find out why. Thanks for forgetting |
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« Reply #6 on: November 02, 2009, 02:32:37 pm » |
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*Chuckles* Um... you're welcome?  Although it may have been my computer... I'll try them out again. EDIT: They worked this time; it was my comp. Anyway, they're all good. The only problem I saw was that in "The End of the Jed", the dialogue was a bit choppy and things didn't flow too well. Other than that, they're pretty good! |
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« Reply #7 on: November 02, 2009, 02:40:48 pm » |
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I had to put the dialog from another member's story in there, since they both coincided.
Thanks for reading them!
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« Reply #8 on: November 02, 2009, 02:45:03 pm » |
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Ah, okay then.
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« Reply #9 on: November 02, 2009, 04:33:13 pm » |
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They were excellend, MJ, tho I noticed the same thing Flash did..
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   The dream is free.. the work to achieve it is sold separately.OOC: An OOC expression of horror would confirm your humanity nicely.  MLNO. The only forum I know where expressions like the one above are commonplace. Everyone is frustrating in their own special way.
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« Reply #10 on: November 30, 2009, 11:57:55 am » |
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I added some new stories, let me know what you think!
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