Really good Korchi.
This one line seems awkward:
He would always have to listen to them yell and listen to the sound of police sirens since they lived so close to the station.
How about:
He would now have to listen to them yell all day and hear the sound of endless police sirens from the station down the street.
Ah sounds much better. Thanks, yeah now that I go back it does sound like a awkward sentence.
*sigh* now I have to type one non drug related for the second part of the assignment. I think I may do it on gambling.
@Tim -- sure I don't mind changing the name. Ok switched it to Gabe.
