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Anyone want to proof-read this please?

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« on: December 07, 2009, 09:17:56 pm »
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He yelled at Tim saying things like “that's where all my cigarettes are going!!!” and “dirty thief!”.

I'm not sure if that is the correct use of quotations, but if I were you, I'd change it to:

"'That's where all my cigarettes are going!!!,' he reprimanded. 'You dirty thief!'"

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Reporting Tm for thievery and stealing cigarettes.

Sentence fragment there.


His uncle, as a result of being drunk, eventually lead to Tim's arrest...

If I find any more, I'll keep posting/editing. Looks good so far.
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