Message #234051

[Trijhak]

Aww, no posts... If I am to improve I need criticism. Constructive Criticism.

And because I am in the mood, I shall post two chapters today, this is the second.
SECTION 3: A Heroine's Journey, Part 1.

Lewifya looked from the top of a mountain. It had been days since Shatterheat had returned to the UD base. She could feel the cold night wind blowing against her back. Normally, if she stood in this spot she would be seen straight away by Skrall or leftover Rahkshi. She had been sent out to find Shatterheat, mainly for two reasons: A, she was a Glatorian, and B, she was his best friend. Shatterheat had last been sighted heading into a dimensional portal, but the Black and Orange Skrall had been sighted coming out of a dimensional gate near here. The Black and orange Skrall probably had Shatterheat. Hopefully as a prisoner rather than an ally. She jumped down, hiding herself in the shadows from the night patrols of Skrall and leftover Rahkshi. Sometimes even Skakdi patrolled here, but only at day.

Lewifya paused as she heard footsteps coming. How she hated the night: it was dark, and the people who liked it were mainly the most dangerous. Although they weren't understandable, tey speek liek tis. Which was annoying, their most valuable ally was bad speech. However, Night still couldn't beat what was really at the top of Lewifya's worst fear list: the GRAAAAAHHHs of angry Skakdi were. Footsteps simply passed right her, taking no notice. Footsteps, it seemed, was a dumb being with no brain. She reached around the wall that was behind her, franticly searching for a weak spot she could use a weapon to break through. There was none, but she was startled as a she fell through the floor at a certain point. Instead of being in the Orange Skrall's HQ she was in an armoury. Perhaps she could sneak past disguised as a Sister of the Skrall or an enslaved Glatorian, or a guard. She picked the latter.

Then she fell through the floor again as she tried to reach out to the armour-it had a defense system... and she found herself being looked at by he Black and Orange Skrall before seeing Black.
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Shatterheat looked around, Everything was still white. Then a black circle appeared, and out came... Lewifya?

This was strange-Lewifya had not even known what Shatterheat had done. How did she find him?

He made Lewifya go back to consciousness.

"How... did you get here?"

"I fell into their base."

"But this is where the LMBs once were..."

"No, it's not... it's an illusion. If you stop believing it you can go through it. I read the history of the Island of Mata Nui's Bohrok Swarms."

"Stop believing... if this is fake, I guess the white will disappear... after we've found our way back to the UD I've got to form a mini-team in a mini-team..."

And so Shatterheat started not believing in the white. Colour came back to his vision, and he could see now. This was an illusional room. To get out... just simply eat the key!

And the door opened. And Shatterheat, followed by Lewifya, ran out. Both expected to hear alarms. None came, as alarms can't move. They found themselves in a heavily guarded area, and no-one was looking at them. They saw the place for the first time. It was bigger on the inside... it had a bad colour scheme (black, red, green, blue, purple, every colour imaginable in the most clashing way possible.) And not to mention... the Skrall had thousands of servants and minions... How were they going to escape, with all these here? And then everything went silent... and they could hear the Skrall, talking to them.

"I know you've escaped. I was watching you. Not many get past the illusions... And not many get past the guards-"

The Skrall was interrupted by a flash of white energy.

"And many teleport in... well, maybe not many but three of us did."

"yeh wel at leest wee traked lwfya heer so we culd find a wai in..."

Bwakaka had arrived, along with Sklas and Urded.

The Skrall said in a bitter tone, "You interrupted my coffee break! Wait, how can I drink coffee... I remember, I can't do maths..."
NEXT: SECTION 3: Part 2, Arrival in Universes