Message #151290

[Flipz]

Nice work on the new illustrations!  However, I need you to put them aside for now--I have the script for the first part of RoH ready for you, so I'm going to type it up now. 
Here's panel 1:

Ray of Hope Act I: The Unforseen Quest:

Part 1
1.)
I: Scene: The exterior of the Kalmor Cantina, at night.  The main sign has a light shining on it, as does a wooden marquee to the right saying, “Now Pl…JON…” (the marquee reads “Now Playing: Jonas Bros.”, but most of the sign is cut off by the edge of the panel.)  Three silhouettes in the background are running near the left side, pursued by the silhouettes of a mob of crazed fans.  (The implication is that they escaped from the back door of the Cantina.)
Silhouette 2 (small text): Run for it, Nick!

II: Scene: The interior of the Kalmor.  Wide shot, towards the doorway.  (The bar is in the middle of the left half of the panel, with the doorway in about the same position on the right half.  The line representing the corner is just to the left of the middle line of the panel.)  The Cantina is mostly empty, though the debris, overturned chairs, and damage to the stage and equipment indicate that it had recently been occupied by hordes of screaming fans who swarmed the stage not too long ago.  Captain MacDonald, the bartender, stands behind the bar, cleaning the inside of the glass with a rag, and Beeky31, Treecleaver, and Bootsie606 have just sat down at the bar.
CMD: Well, G’day fellas!  ‘Tis been a Kracken’s age since I seen ye last, eh mate?
TC: We’ve been kinda busy.  Business has been slow these days.
CMD: I don’t doubt it, wi’ the economy sinkin’ like a shipful o’ angry wombats.  So, what’ll it be?
B31: Oh, the usual.

III: Scene: TC and B31 from Captain MacDonald’s view.
CMD: All ri’, here ya go.  A Cherry Root Beer for Treecleaver—
TC: Yes!
CMD: —an’ a steamin’ mug o’ Peach Cider for Beeky31.
B31: Captain MacDonald, I keep telling you to call me “Beeky”.
CMD: I’ll call ya “Beeky” when you call me “Roger”.
B31: Fair ‘nuff.

IV: Scene: B606 from Capt. MacDonald’s view.  An empty barstool is to the left of Bootsie, and the cantina doorway is in the background behind said barstool.  Flipz is standing in the doorway, holding a sealed scroll up in triumph (left hand).
CMD: And what would you like, me li’l joey?
B606: I’ll have a—
Flipz: Eureka!  I finally got it!


Incidentally, I can't access my main computer right now (the motherboard died), so the photos will have to wait.  Do you happen to have any Agents sets?  Because Agents Chase and Fuse both have the same hairpiece, just in different colors.  Oh, and I like the new font for the pirates, but I prefer the first one be used for the "normal" characters.  If you have a computer-ish font, it might work well for thr brickghouls-essentially a cross between Rakghouls (from Star Wars) and the Borg, but done in a lego-esque manner.  If you look at Farplanet's "Exarthian" creation, you can see them in the background behind Sam Magalore.

Panel 2 soon...