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The legodac bi-monthly short story contest #7 HAS BEGUN

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A contest in CREATIVE WRITING. Tell a short story, your theme perimeters are as follows:
 Smiley your story takes place in the past, from 500 million years BC to yesterday, if you don't like history class, then give us the FUTURE
 Smiley Use existing LEGO themes or create a new LEGO theme, ie: I've allways loved the idea of LEGO LINK
 Smiley Relax and use your imagination, I won't be judging SPELLLINGE, that's up to your Grammar teacher
 Smiley Prizes are as follows: 1st All 7 totemic animals
                                2nd is 60 fuel cells
                                 3rd is 3 licenses
 Smiley Contest runs 1st and last halves of each month, good luck and may the Brick be with you


  Wink Small revision, I'd like to remove all restrictions, A wiser man than me once told me, more limits, less entries, so write what you want to write about, Thanks KF
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« Reply #1 on: March 06, 2009, 05:18:02 am »

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How the Lego Universe was created


  One day, sometime in the 1900s, Radia and her pals are working to find a new anti-virus software. That virus is very powerful, powerful enough to beat a giant in one blow. Eventually, the virus is too quick and too agile, so every computer in Lego Land has the virus infected.
   Because the Alpha team had no way of defending the virus, which was late known created by Dr. Inferno. Radia and her team members are too old to fight an dcapture the evil Inferno, so another group was created--- the Agents. The Agents were young men who have special abilities, just like the mutants in X-men. Hikaru and takeshi, from the exo-force group, also helped fight the villian. They used teh machines to fight the mean Dr. Inferno, but nothing worked. Dr Inferno was ingenious about fighting.
   After a couple of days, a strange thing happened. Dr inferno's own computer also got infected by his own virus! With the worst anti-virus software, Inferno's compter exploded. The stolen crystals became neon lights, the computer became a robo-dog, and posters in the room became trees. The Lego Universe is created! Dr. Inferno had no longer anymore plans, thus he is caught by the virus he created. The virus has finally done some good.

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« Reply #2 on: March 08, 2009, 12:55:16 pm »

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How the Lego Universe was created


  One day, sometime in the 1900s, Radia and her pals are working to find a new anti-virus software. That virus is very powerful, powerful enough to beat a giant in one blow. Eventually, the virus is too quick and too agile, so every computer in Lego Land has the virus infected.
   Because the Alpha team had no way of defending the virus, which was late known created by Dr. Inferno. Radia and her team members are too old to fight an dcapture the evil Inferno, so another group was created--- the Agents. The Agents were young men who have special abilities, just like the mutants in X-men. Hikaru and takeshi, from the exo-force group, also helped fight the villian. They used teh machines to fight the mean Dr. Inferno, but nothing worked. Dr Inferno was ingenious about fighting.
   After a couple of days, a strange thing happened. Dr inferno's own computer also got infected by his own virus! With the worst anti-virus software, Inferno's compter exploded. The stolen crystals became neon lights, the computer became a robo-dog, and posters in the room became trees. The Lego Universe is created! Dr. Inferno had no longer anymore plans, thus he is caught by the virus he created. The virus has finally done some good.


Congrats to Lionytai, a really fine tale, see winners to tell me what animals you want

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« Reply #3 on: March 09, 2009, 03:40:45 am »

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« Reply #4 on: March 09, 2009, 07:37:42 am »

may i enter again?

Yes, of course, good luck
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« Reply #5 on: March 09, 2009, 08:06:31 am »

The Kidnapped and Foreign Sovereign
   There once was a nice and brave king of the country Lionytai, in the planet of Lego Universe. This smart king, named Arthur, liked mathematics and science. He even used his good science skills to capture villains, and one of the most evil villains was just caught - Bob Skull, a spooky skeleton who betrayed Star Justice, a society for finding justice in outer space, on mln.lego.com. MLN is a webpage system for Lego users. Bob, from outer space, led many Lego club users to betray Star Justice. Bob even stole the secret plans from Star Justice!
   Thousand-year-old Brian Skull didn't like the way his twin brother was put in prison right below the palace of Lionytai. He visited Bob Skull secretly everyday by using a satellite to locate where Bob was, and then came down the path made by the satellite. He didn't know what to do to seek for revenge, so he was really angry.
   For several times, a person with a mask and a cape attacked the king. King Arthur's strong army had beaten the masked person in a white shirt with black stripes, so this made the masked person frustrated. The day after the last fight the king mysteriously disappeared. The villagers came to a detective team in another country named Mutant because Lionytai didn't have one. Lionytai was just too small.
   "Could you please help us? We couldn't live without the king! Our lives would be ruined!" The villagers explained a lot.
   "Ok, we will help you. Take me to the palace," said Pepper. Pepper, the leader of the detective team, was worried about the serious case. He was a hard-working person.
   The villagers led Pepper and his partner Johnny Lighting the way to their country. Johnny was as fast as sound and he was once an assistance of a famous archaeologist. Because of this, he was brainy compared to others. When they walked past the house of the president of Mutant on the way, Johnny accidentally found some rare minerals on the wheels ofPepper's skateboard, which Pepper always uses to travel, during a rest from the long walk, which Pepper always uses to travel. In fact, Pepper accidentally fell out from the skateboard and landed on the king's crown.
    "Thanks for leading us to your country. We will stop here. You can go back," said Pepper. The villagers went back to their country and Pepper and Johnny took out their PC in Johnny's backpack to do some research, sitting in a bench near the president's house.
   "Hmm... Let's see," said Johnny. Johnny was looking for information about the president and Pepper was beside him looking at the news website too. "Ah ha! Here's what we want! 'Mr. President of Mutant, who really loves to visit famous people, went on vacation to visit well-known actor Johnny Thunder, the newest actor of James Bond. The President likes James Bond movies, and he always went to see how the movie was going.' Johnny Thunder?! I didn't know Johnny Thunder was that good at acting!" Johnny Lighting jumped out of the bench. Johnny Thunder was Johnny Lighting's cousin. "When I visited him the last time, he told me he was going to visit a celebrity. Why did the president go to visit him instead?"
   "Maybe Johnny Thunder didn't have time. Or maybe it's another celebrity he's visiting. Or even it might be a secret plan that no one else should know. Anyway, let's go to the police station and tell the police about what we just found," replied Pepper, "about the iridium we found on my skateboard. We've got work to do."
   At the police station, Pepper and Johnny Lighting met Dr. Killroy, an extremely famous and experienced archaeologist of the whole Legoland. Killroy was really humorous and liked to talk about what he finds at excavation sites.
   "Howdy, Pepper and Johnny! It's nice to see you again!" Dr. Killroy patted their shoulders. "You know, I was working at an excavation site. A really special excavation site I went to. Guess what we excavated!" Dr. Killroy liked to make people guess about what he recently did.
   "Extremely large bird-like dinosaurs?" Johnny knew that Dr. Killroy mostly went to dinosaur excavation sites because Johnny was once an assistance of Dr. Killroy, just as mentioned before.
   "Never-ever-found-before-and-larger-than-a-human archaic pizza that apes once ate?" Pepper always had ideas people never thought of.
   "Not quite, boys." Killroy finally told them the answer. "We are excavating a meteorite! Look at this precious iridium I found!" Johnny and Pepper were shocked in amazement.
   "Pepper! Psst! Psst! I think this is the substance we found on your skateboard's wheels," Johnny whispered to Pepper. Pepper nodded his head to show agreement.
   "We'd better leave, Dr Killroy. We have some work to do. So long!" Dr. Killroy waved and Pepper and Johnny went back where they found iridium. They also found King Arthur and Brain Skull, who was holding the king's crown. Pepper picked up a rope which Brain didn't notice and threw it to Johnny. Johnny then threw the rope on Brian. Just then, a police officer arrived from the police station.
   "Freeze, Brian Skull, or anyone who you are! You're under arrest!" yelled the officer. He sounded mean and angry.
"I...I admit it. I kidnapped the king! I took the crown but lost it and found it again! I...I wanted to save Bob! I could be as famous as Bob if I take the crown to my emperor in outer space! My queen would be proud of me!" Bob sounded really disappointed.
"Did you say outer space? That's why I found iridium on my skateboard's wheels when I found the crown. Now I get it!" Pepper began to figure things out.
"You are incorrect zero percent. But now my plans are all destroyed! Boo hoo!" Bob began to weep. He knelt down, his head facing the ground. Everything went silent for a couple of minutes. The police officer finally spoke.
“Brian, you’ll be put in jail for...” The king interrupted the police officer's words.
"I have other plans,” the king said. He had a smile in his face. "I found out that Brian isn't a really bad skeleton. He is only just too impatient and can be taught to be a great hero."
The next day, the king was back in the palace. Brian Skull became the teacher of teaching the prisoners how to be nice. Everyone cheered for the king and Brian and the country is peaceful forever.
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« Reply #6 on: March 10, 2009, 09:15:57 am »

How LEGO Universe was created

   On day long, long ago in LEGOville there was a very eccentric inventor. This inventor spent all of his time working on “The best invention that LEGOville has ever seen.” However, years passed, and the people of LEGOville grew weary of the eccentric inventor. It seemed like he had made absolutely no progress whatsoever. They started dropping by his house less and less to find out what he was making, and spending more and more time as far away from him as they could. Eventual, nobody ever came by to find out how his invention was coming along. But that day that nobody came along, he finally finished his invention. It was a…. time machine! He ran into town telling everyone that he had completed his invention, but nobody was there! He ran around, and he found a note. It said:

Dear Professor,
    We have grown tired of your rambles and have decided to leave LEGOville to start a new town. If you ever finish the invention, please post us.
    From,
  The people of LEGOville

     The professor was shattered. He had worked on this invention for all these years so they could have a better home, and they had left him! He sadly walked home, and found out that his door was unlocked. When he went to the time machine he found it had already been used, as well. Thinking about how odd it was, he noticed another note. It read:

Dear Professor,
   We heard your rambles as we were leaving town, so we came up here and used your time machine. We entered the ‘2000 years from now time.’ Thank you Professor for doing this.
   From,
 The people of LEGOville

     Hurriedly he entered the time machine and set the time for ‘2000 years from now.’ And he didn’t notice the dog that had entered the time machine until he had started twisting through time. When he came out, he found the whole town waiting for him. And the dog, which he had noticed as soon as he started twisting through time, had turned robotic. It was a robo-dog! The people of LEGOville thanked him profusely. They had gotten to a new time – the time of LEGO Universe!

THE END!

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This one's over, next one begins now, see contest winners for last weeks winners.
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I'm a little confused, but legodac told me to post this so...

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Wham! Rocks and debris sprayed everywhere. Javic ducked, narrowly missing losing his head to a stray rock. Arrows started zipping past, causing Javic to dive for cover behind a rock. He still couldn’t see through the dust swirling through the night air. Who was attacking? What was attacking?
More rocks sailed into the ruined fortress, wreaking havoc on the strong stone walls. Dark shapes began forming in the dust. Lots of dark shapes. With a yell, Javic drew his sword and slew two of the shapes before they knew he was there. A sword swung towards his head, but with an expert slash the arm wielding the sword was on the ground. Three more of the shapes sprang forward, but Javic wasn’t worried. He sprinted forward a few steps, jumped off a rock, and flipped over them, slashing one down in midair. Allies began flowing from the broken fortress, hacking down their attackers. But the battle’s conclusion was obvious…

Three days later found Javic walking alone over the mountains, away from the destruction. He paused, scanned the terrain ahead. A large city stood in his way, the trade center of the entire land: Gathai.
Through the city Javic walked, straight to the great citadel in the center. Here, he found one of the captains.
“An attack, you say?”
“Massive at that. They crept up silently then used some giant ballista to fling rocks straight into our fortress. Hundreds of well-trained warriors stormed in.”
“Strange,” the captain mused, “they attack a fortress like Paltech. It is of no strategical value along the frontier – it can be easily cut off. There must be another reason then all-out war on our kingdom.”
“Or possibly it’s just a cover,” Javic suggested, “but what I want to know is what you’re going to do about it?”
“I will bring up this information at the meeting tonight. We have good barracks, if you want…”
“Never mind me, I’ll be off,” Javic interrupted.
“Where to?”
“Paltech. I’m going to have a look around.”
“Alone?”
“Yes,” Javic smiled a little, “that way I won’t be held up by some gallant knight in armor.”
The captain looked at Javic. He certainly didn’t look like any of the knights he had ever seen. More like an outlaw: his clothes were all black, and light enough to move easily in. No armor whatsoever. A bow and full quiver were stored on his back, underneath his cloak. A short sword hung on his left hip, while several daggers and knives balanced it. Looking closer, the captain thought but what a sword! I’ve never seen the like!

Standing still as a statue in the black night, he listened. He was back at Paltech by now. For the last few hours he had been dodging patrols of… what? He still couldn’t identify them. Most were in dull grey mail with masks. Their flags flapping in the light breeze were not to be recognized. The few times Javic had heard them speak he couldn’t even make out what language they were speaking.
Around noon, he got fed up with hiding. A patrol of five was walking slowly towards him. He casually left his hiding place and stepped onto the path.
All five reacted fast. They started, but as one lifted their shields, lowered spears and slowly advanced.
“Who are you?” Javic asked, still without drawing his weapons.
No answer.
“What do you want?”
No answer. They were only twenty feet away when he drew his bow, and, fast as lightning, sent an arrow zipping into the face of one of his adversaries! It bounced harmlessly off the mask.
Drawing his sword, Javic charged.
He grabbed a handful of dirt and flung it in their faces, slashing at a spear with his sword. The wood handle broke in half before the razor edge of the sword. Before they could react, Javic had leaped backwards, pulled a dagger and sent it zipping into the neck of one, right between the mask and the mail.
The four remaining had by now surrounded him, spears pointing at him from all directions. He leaped up and forward, landing on a spear and knocking it to the ground. The other pulled a sword and slashed at Javic’s head, but found only air. Javic’s sword didn’t.
Whack! A spear handle cracked down of his head. Fighting to stay conscious, Javic staggered back, reeling from the blow. He barely dodged the thrust that followed, but managed to stay out of range. He melted back into the woods, out of sight.
“Having fun?” A voice asked.
Whirling, Javic found himself facing a masked warrior lounging against a tree.
“Oh, don’t worry; I’m not looking for a fight. Not with you anyway.”
“Who are you?” Javic asked, trying to collect his wits.
“That doesn’t matter as much as finding a better place to talk. This is quite unprotected, you know. He pointed at the three soldiers, who were poking around the bushes looking for them. He beckoned, and slipped through the trees.

After several minutes, Javic found himself looking at the fortress of Paltech. From a nearby hill.
“Now,” said the stranger, “we won’t be overheard here. Who are you?”
“Javic, a traveler.”
“I am – how shall I put it – an agent. Name of Mokaine What I am doing here is quite confidential, but I assure you it will not effect anyone who does not try to interfere. Unlike them,” He nodded towards Paltech.
“You know who they are?” Javic asked.
“Of course. They are old non-friends of mine, those ol’ Azkakh. They are hardly human at all, they live for treasure. They hoard up treasure all their days and never do anything with it. They never do anything else.”
“Then why did they attack Paltech?”
Mokaine’s eyes twinkled. “You’re a sharp one, aren’t you? That, my friend, is a very good question. A very good question indeed. That is why I’m here: to find out why they attacked. Having been inside the fort, I thought you might know.”
“No treasure whatsoever,” Javic confirmed, “the captain there was a very good friend of mine, he told me that there was nothing of any real value. So then what are you going to do?”
“Another good question. Obviously the Azkakh thought there was something here, or they wouldn’t have attacked.”
“If they are so bent on treasure, I would have thought they’d leave by now after not finding anything,” Javic mused.
Mokaine’s eyebrows rose, “You know, you really were a lucky find. Either they are still searching, or they know something your captain friend didn’t. There’s only one way to find out, though.”
“How?”
“Tonight, my friend, we will sneak into the fortress and snoop around. Unless you want to miss out, of course.” Receiving a quick shake of the head, Mokaine outlined his plan. “You must find the best way in, as you know the place better then me. Next we will locate the leader’s bunk. There I will put out the leader and you will search the room. If you find anything pertaining to Paltech, take it. We will escape to a nice rooftop and there we will examine any finds you made. Got it? Good. Tonight it is, then…”

The night was cloudless, with a big, full moon. Both knew their work was cut out for them sneaking into the stone fortress. The wind blew noisily through the trees and rocks, effectively covering any noises they made.
Silently Javic led the way to the wall wreaked by catapults the day of the attack. A dozen or more guards lounged around there. Time of plan B. Going to the back wall, Javic found the small back gate. Coming from the side, he pressed against the wall to stay under the guards’ vision. He used oil supplied by Mokaine to grease the hinges, and then set to work on the lock. With a small dagger he carefully prodded the heavy bolt. It was quite solid. Frustrated, Javic turned away. Suddenly, the door opened! Inside stood six soldiers, wielding swords and grim looks.
“Uh, Mokaine? We have a problem…”
Mokaine drew his sword and leaped into action, scything through one, then grabbing the body and using it as a shield to ward off the flurry of blows from the other five. Javic whipped out his sword and charged. Seeing a blade swinging at his head, he dove into a roll, knocking two of the soldiers off their feet with his body, then leaped up and traded blows with one of those still standing.
Throwing away his “shield,” Mokaine whipped his blade and, with an expert move, disarmed an enemy seconds before driving his blade home. Then he whipped out a small knife and flung it whistling through the air into the last remaining enemy.
“Nice work,” he said, “but I’ve got a bad feeling about this…” At least a score of their adversaries were rushing towards them, off the walls, from the barracks, seething through the doors.
“Time to go,” Javic said, making a rush for the door.
“Couldn’t agree more,” Mokaine said, jumping out and slamming the small gate shut. “Now what? We don’t know anything still. By tomorrow their guard will be up and possibly they’ll be gone.
“Then we get the information tonight,” Javic said, leading the way to the front gate. As he expected, it was unguarded. He looked furtively around then made a dash for the keep. He dove gracefully through the window, rolling across the floor inside without a sound. He slithered across the floor, under a table and to the far wall. From there he leaped, caught the ceiling and pushed a trapdoor used for dropping debris on attackers open. He whipped his body up and in, then took stock of his surroundings.
“Give a hand to those not as agile,” Mokaine whispered from the room below. After helping him up, Javic led the way, this time slower, towards the captain’s old room. Upon finding it he put his eye to the keyhole and looked in. A figure stood by the window. Putting his bow to the large hole, Mokaine silently drew the arrow back, and fired the arrow swiftly into the back of the figure, then entered the room.
“Quick, search for anything pertaining to Paltech! He tackled a desk, rifling through the drawers for documents. After a few minutes, he pulled something out and put it in a pouch at his waist, then listened. Footsteps coming along the hall!
He beckoned to Javic, and then rushed to the window. Guards everywhere. He drew his sword and jumped. Wham! Clash! He landed on a guard then slashed another. Javic landed lightly beside him, whipped out a bow and shot a third.
Without another backward glance, both fled.

“All in all, I’d say that went well,” Mokaine said, “we slew nine Azkakh warriors at least, plus a captain or some other type of officer. More importantly, we got this,” he held aloft a stack of papers, bound with a string.
“What’s that?”
“Dunno, but it’s the only thing I found that said Paltech on it.” He undid the string, and glanced through the papers. He gasped.
“It’s a plan of the fortress!” He whispered, “look!”
“Yeah,” Javic agreed, “so?”
“And this paper here, it’s a puzzle of some kind.”

Tsewhtron renroc
Ytnewt secap tsae
Evif teef nwod

“It pretty obvious, isn’t it?” Javic said, “backwards words. It says, ‘Northwest corner, Twenty paces east, Five feet down.”
“I wonder what’s there.” Mokaine murmured.
“Another clue, most likely,” Javic said, “and so on until they come to the treasure of all ages.”
“If the clues are this easy, they’d have found the treasure in an hour,” Mokaine objected.
“Maybe they get harder.”

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WSS contest#2  WE HAVE A 3 WAY TIE, yah I know what you're thinking, there were only 2 entries, both incredible stories, however, KF, with all his homework, managed to send me a story of epic proportions. Remember, I judge here, and reserve the right to do almost anything I want, so who's complaning? Great stories all, I was inthralled.

Lionytai, Obi, and KF all will recieve 1st prizes

I took this from the winners topic, which I will soon close. Each Sunday at noon, I'll post the winners and the next contest begins  following the post.

Weekly short story contest #3 Begins now, 
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« Reply #10 on: March 16, 2009, 08:00:31 am »

O.K... When are you sending the prizes?

Anyway, here's my entry:

Finding the Mind Control Emitter

“This is Rita Blisstow. My mission: Discover who is the possessor of the Mind Control Emitter and what his/her plans are,” Rita told me.
   “O.K…? I thought this rank was all about music?” I questioned her
   “It was, until I intercepted part of this message from an opposing spy to their master. It reads:
……………….. This is agent……………stolen the mind control machine………………….hand the machine…………………..possession of the codebook……………………….remember me…………….take over the world……….out!

   “What are all of those dots for?” I asked inquisitively.
   “Those are the words that I couldn’t recognize. You see, this code is nearly unbreakable, and the fact that I cracked some of it is astounding. In a message I sent you previously, I need you to get the Mind Control Emitter back, even if you have to give its owner the secret Code Book,” Rita Finished
   “O.K. But why can’t you do this?”
   “Because I’m being blackmailed.”
   “By who?”
   “The owner of the mind Control Emitter”
   “Who is that?”
   “That’s what you’re supposes to find out!”
   “Oh, yeah!” I remembered
   “Now, agent, go do your job!!” And with that, Rita hung up.
   “Well, where to start?” I wondered. Then I remembered Rita’s message “ …build some HFM’s and send them to David Lampton and his band.
   “Right,” I said to myself, and got to work. Once I was done, I sent them to David Lampton’s entire band. David sent me the Codebook BP. Rick, Seno, and Izzy sent me the secret messages, which I used to make the Codebook. But JP Varity’s message was interesting. It read:

   “Sorry sir! I must have nodded off. I’m so woozy. Let me start again. This is agent JP, reporting in. I have successfully stolen the mind control machine. These fools have no Idea what they’re in for! Unless my orders have changed, I will hand the Mind Control Emitter over to the agent who proves that they are in possession of the Codebook. We’re almost there, sir! Remember me when you take over the world! JP Out.”

I quickly rushed over to Rita’s place (for this was much too important for phone).
“Hello,” she greeted me, “What are you doing over here?”
   “Man, have I got news for you! When I sent JP Variety a HFM, he sent me this:

           “Sorry sir! I must have nodded off. I’m so woozy. Let me start again. This is agent JP, reporting in. I have successfully stolen the mind control machine. These fools have no Idea what they’re in for! Unless my orders have changed, I will hand the Mind Control Emitter over to the agent who proves that they are in possession of the Codebook. We’re almost there, sir! Remember me when you take over the world! JP Out.”
When she finished reading the message, she asked
   “Did you get the Codebook?”
   I gulped, “Yes, and I sent it to JP Variety”
   “You WHAT!?” she screamed
   “Don’t worry, he sent me the MCE (Mind Control Emitter)” I said nervously.
   Her attitude changed instantly,” Good Job, agent,” she congratulated me, “I know that I can count on you in the future.”

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« Reply #11 on: March 16, 2009, 08:20:35 am »

Lego Arch
   Have you ever been to a LEGO monument that is taller than any building?? The Lego Arch is the tallest monument in the Lego World! It’s on the bank of the Bionicle Beach and over 5,000 kilometers tall!
   When Johnny Thunder, an adventurer with brown clothes, got to the Arch in Extreme Island, John could not believe his eyes. The color of the Lego Arch is actually brown, but if you look from it far away, it looks like Colors of the rainbow! As John walked inside the building, he saw animated figures who told the story about the Alpha Team. Then, he heard tour guides singing. They sang so well that All Lego Men were all singing together. He also saw a variety of tools that were used by Mars ago.
John took a trip to the top of the Lego Arch in Mars Mission vehicle. It went up like a zigzag, and it made him very dizzy. After he got to the top, he saw the Aqua Raider Ship which took Lego Men to eyesight the knight's Kingdom.
   The Lego Arch was a wonderful place that no one would forget it. If you ever have a chance in Legoworld, don’t forget to visit the world's tallest monument. 

oh for 2nd stoy prizes i want any 5 (different but must have turtle and snake)
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« Reply #12 on: March 19, 2009, 09:23:07 am »

Sorry Obi, I knew I missed someone, 5 animals on the way and I still owe Wagner 2 gypsum
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« Reply #13 on: March 21, 2009, 07:31:01 am »

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« Reply #14 on: March 22, 2009, 04:44:41 pm »

Weekly Short Story contest #4 begins now
 
       Obi wins this week, congrats buddy, nice story, please PM me what animals you want, you have your choice.

        Lionytai takes 2nd, I'll mail the DC this evening, nice story too, very different, hope you enter the next one one as well
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« Reply #15 on: March 23, 2009, 03:55:35 am »

i want to write a new story

One day i met an only-head man
his name is echo--- how strange names ran
he told me to give him a fruit to eat
an apple, to be exact, to get a treat

I don't know what he meant. then i met farmer john
I helped him plowed; i cleaned the lawn
he gave me some apples for my work
he also gave me a very special fork

I gave the apple to echo. HE gave me something great
i got the apple pie blueprint! i bet that costs 8
to thank farmer john, i made the apple pie
he gave me the Crimson apple blueprint. Wee Hi!

I don't know wht athat it. i made in anyway
i became renk one! in an unexpected way
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« Reply #16 on: March 26, 2009, 08:16:30 am »

Dolill's Story
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“An-tue-oneee-ah-ho-ho-ho-ho, an-tue-oneee-ah-ho-ho-ho-ho, an-tue-oneee-ah-ho-ho-ho-ho, an-tue-oneee-ah-ho-ho-ho-ho, an-tue-oneee-ah-ho-ho-ho-ho-HU!”
“My gosh!” I thought, “are they still at it?!”
Sorry if that wasn’t a proper introduction. My name is Dolill. My mom is Hehewuti and my dad is Vihow. My Mom, Dad, and Achaki, the medicine man, are still at it, practicing their ancient Indian rituals. I can’t believe they still do those things! My ancestors did them years age to bring peace, but all they bring now is a headache to my head.
   .We would be a lot better off if we had just followed Hokee’s advice about putting a wi-fi transmitter in the totem pole so we didn’t have to do all this fancy stuff to do something-or-another with the totem pole.
   You might wonder what the wi-fi transmitter would be for. Well, most people don’t know that we put rocks with carvings in the inside of the totem pole. I know, it seems mad. I think so, too.
   “Dolill,” My mom interrupted, “Have you cleaned your room yet? He’s is coming to dinner tonight!”
   .“Yes, Mom!” I replied.
Why does she even ask me that? I always clean up my in the morning. Anyway, Acahaki comes to dinner every night, so I really don’t know why she wants me to clean up my room. It’s not as if we’re eating dinner in my room.
   “We really need to make a great impression, to show him our respect for him and his idea!” my Mom said, not yet finished.
   .“What?!” I replied. Acahaki’s new idea was to make an even bigger totem pole!
   “Acahaki’s coming to dinner, too, you know,” she said.
   “Wait, I thought Acahaki was the other person coming? Is the other person Kotori?” I asked, completely bewildered now.
   “No,” my mom said, and then, more thoughtfully, “but thanks for reminding me. He’s coming, too.”
   .“Wait,” I said, even more bewildered than I believed possible, “If Kotori and Acahaki aren’t the guest, then who is?”
   My mom looked surprised. “I thought you would have guessed it already!” se said. “The guest is…Hokee! We’ve decided to use his idea for the totem pole, so everyone agrees that he should come back!”
My mind was spinning. I couldn’t believe it! Hokee was coming back! For a minute, I just stood there, my mouth open in shock.
   .“You’re…you’re letting him come back?” I managed to say, still in a state of shock.
   “Why, yes Dolill, why, is there something wrong with that?” my mom said surprised. She knew that I wanted Hokee back soooo bad, so, to me, she looked a bit confused.
   “No,” I said, “ THIS IS AWSOME!!!!!!! I CAN’T BELIVE HOKEE’S COMING BACK, I CAN’T BELIEVE IT!!!!!!!!!."
   “Are you all right Dolill?” my mom asked. My “little” outburst had been unexpected, so I probably shocked her.
   “Of course I’m okay,” I said, so happy I felt like dancing, “Its just… this took me by surprise, so… I really wasn’t expecting this.”
   Just then, the door opened, and when I looked, it seemed too good to be true! It was Hokee!

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« Reply #17 on: March 29, 2009, 12:24:15 pm »

Well, the winners of #4 are the same as last week, good work guys, same deal as last week.
   Obi please PM me what animals you want and Lionytai I'll mail you another DC.

WSSC #5 begins now
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« Reply #18 on: March 31, 2009, 09:05:28 am »

Wallus Wizard's Tale

“Fire!”
   “Hold your position, men!”
   “Duck!”
   “Why not goose or chi- ahhh!”
   “Amazing,” I mused, “they still don’t get it, even after 5 years.” Sorry. I should explain. My name is Wallace Wizard. I’m the old wizard you might have heard about who lives in the rickety tower on the hill between the castles.
There should only be one castle, but the king’s son, Prince Pelle, and his daughter, Princess Cynthia, are fighting for the throne. The want it all to themselves, and won’t agree to share it. So, instead of agreeing on something, they use was as their solution.
   “Mr. Wallace,” gasped a messenger for Prince Pelle. He looked like he had just run up the stairs of my tower – and he, in fact, just did, “The honorable Prince Pelle would like to speak with you.”
   “Very well,” I said, “Bring him in.”  Prince Pelle entered, looking like he hadn’t slept in weeks.
   “Sorry for my ragged appearance,” he started, “I haven’t slept days due to this little skirmish.
“Phaa,” I thought to myself, “If that as a skirmish, I’d hate to see what a full-on battle would look like.” But I didn’t say that. What I did say, however, was:
   “No matter, no matter. Now, what have you come to see me for?”
   “Well, with your permission,” Prince Pelle began, “ I would like to use your tower as a lookout post to spy on those sneaking Gauntlets!”
   “Sure,” I thought to myself, “once I see pigs fly.” But, again, I didn’t say that. Instead I said:
   “I’ll consider it. Now, if you will please leave me, I have work to do.”
   “Of course, of course.” Prince Pelle said politely. He and his messenger left the room, the messenger still gasping for breath.
   “Confounded war,” I mumbled to myself once they had left. But no later had they left my room, when a Gauntlets messenger ran into the room.
Mr. Wallace,” gasped a messenger for Princess Cynthia. He looked like he had just run up the stairs of my tower – and he, in fact, just did, “The honorable Princess Cynthia would like to speak with you.”
   “Very well,” I said, “Bring her in.”  Princess Cynthia entered, looking like she hadn’t slept in weeks.
   “Sorry for my ragged appearance,” she started,” I haven’t slept days due to this little skirmish.
“Phaa,” I thought to myself, “If that as a skirmish, I’d hate to see what a full-on battle would look like.” But I didn’t say that. What I did say, however, was:
   “No matter, no matter. Now, what have you come to see me for?”
   “Well, with your permission,” Princess Cynthia began, “ I would like to use your tower as a lookout post to spy on those sneaking Mantles!”
   “Sure,” I thought to myself, “once I see pigs fly.” But, again, I didn’t say that. Instead I said:
   “I’ll consider it. Now, if you will please leave me, I have work to do.”
   “Of course, of course.” Princess Cynthia said politely. She and her messenger left the room, the messenger still gasping for breath.
Oh, boy.
   Now, instead of considering if I should let Prince Pelle use my tower or not, I had to decide it I wanted to have Prince Pelle use my tower, if Princess Cynthia should use my tower, or if none of them should use my tower, and risk losing my friendship with either of them, or both for that matter. Whew. That’s a lot of stuff to decide!
   I thought and thought and thought and thought and thought, until thinking about thought hurt my thinker (my brain). I almost made up my mind, but then I heard a deafening ROAR! I looked out my window and saw some dragons attempting to fight some Stone Golems. And then the cries of war started up again.
“Come on, dragons, you can do this!”
“ROAR!”
“I slay dragon!”
“Good job, stone golems!”
   The war cries continued all afternoon, and then into the night, and then the next day.
   Once the battle, or, as they called it, skirmish, was over, they both came to me at the same time and asked, again, if they could use my tower as a watchtower. But, since they came together, they got in a big fight over who would get to use the tower. And their fight wasn’t one of those shove-a-thons or small fights. I have a feeling that if I didn’t stop them, they would have dueled right then and there.
   “Now, sit down and tell me why you won’t cooperate!” I demanded.
   Prince Pelle glared at Princess Cynthia, “I am the rightful owner to the throne! I deserve to be king!”
   Princess Cynthia returned the glare send from Prince Pelle, “No, I deserve to be Queen! You are not the rightful heir to the throne, I am!”
   I sighed, “You two are making not only my life, but everyone else’s in the kingdom difficult! If you can’t find a solution in the next 5 minutes, I’m going to turn you both into little pink bunnies and ship you to Mata Nui!
   “Wait a second,” Prince Pelle said puzzled, “I thought this was MLN, not Bionicle?”
   “That’s not the point!” I snapped, “Now get back to the story!”
   “Ok,” they both said in unison.
   “Now, where were we?” I asked myself, “Ah, yes, I remember now. So why don’t you two build the tower of many shields to protect and rule the kingdom together?”
   Prince Pelle glanced at Princess Cynthia nervously, “Ummm… good question. Why don’t we, Cynthia?
   “Ummm…” she said, “That’s an even better question. Why don’t we?”
   I helped them out, “Because you two are too busy fighting to work out a peaceful solution, right?” I guessed.
“Umm…” Princess Cynthia began.
“Yeah, I guess so,” Prince Pelle said.
“So…” I spurred them on again.
“ Lets work together and build it!” Princess Cynthia.
“Yeah!” Prince Pelle agreed, almost shouting.
“But how will we get all the bricks we need?” Princess Cynthia asked.
“The Transmutilation pools,” I filled in helpfully.
“Yeah!” They both said in unison.
So they started on the project, and within a few months, it was completed. So they ruled the kingdom peacefully and did so until their death.

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« Reply #19 on: April 01, 2009, 12:55:10 am »

How to King left thier kids

   One day, king Arthur called his kids Cynthia and Pelle. "Good Morning, my mighty kids. I suppose you are old enough to have your own armies. Which ones would you like?" Both of the kids were very exicted.
   "I would like the be leader of the one with the Glove on it. It's so cool!" replied Princess Cynthia. "It's black, which is the color i love."
   "Father, I would take the One with the white hood." Prince Pelle seemed desperate of getting leadership of the team.
   "Good, kids. Your decisions are very smart. Cynthia, your army is called the guantlets. Pelle, your army is the Mantles. Now go out there and fight Mega Land and K-nex!"
   "Long live the king!" shouted everyone int the palace. "Long live teh knigdom of Legoland!"

   A few months passed. Both Cynthia's and Pelle's army didn't win and battles. They were too weak. On a day they met, they had a plan.
   "How about working together?" Asked the smart princess. "That way we can win."
   "Great idea! Why didn't I think of that?" Prince Pelle felt dumb. "Now let's make a plan. The Strong Men, who are our Pall Wall, Nadeem Knod, Manny Armsand yuor Jorn Knuse, Siege sunder, and Miokoko will be in the front. The other people, teh bowmen, pikemen, teh knights, and the animals teh stone golem and teh dragon, and the people with catapults will defend at teh back. That way we can win."
   The fight began. TEh K-nex and teh MEgabloks united as a team. "Shoo........" "Shoo..........." "Shoo......." big rocks and bows flew as they hit mega land adn teh K-nex. Soon teh other countries are deafted.
    A big problem came. K-nex is much larger than Megabloks land. Who will rule each part? The children are fighting over fro teh land.
   "It's my idea, so i should get teh K-nex land!"Shouted Cynthia. She was really angry, red in teh face.
   "If it weren't for my catapults you woudln't win either!" Prince Pelle was more frustrated than his sister.

    The king quickly saw the problem. He was really disappointed. He couldn't sleep. He didn't want to eat. At last, he knew what to do.
    "Kids, I cannot stand this. I will disappear until the fight si over. I wish yuo can stop fighting."
    "but father...."
    A few days passed. Teh king has dissapeared. The kids are really sad, but they still kept fighting..even now.
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