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« on: July 28, 2008, 12:11:45 pm »
Speed - Galaxy: Discussion Topic
Discussion of the Deamons
~Epic~

All discussion about the Epic goes in this topic. Please don't read and leave, leave a comment or two about what you thought Wink

Important Characters:

Deamon World

Deamons:


Crioone [Cry-ooh-ne]
Taverna [Tah-ver-nah]
Nara [Nay-ra]

Exaltoskull [Ehx-all-toe-skull]

Bellcast [Bell-kast]


Humans:

Hawk / The Scripter
Jet
Dolphin


Terra Eterna / Forever Earth

Renee
Patrick


Land of the Lost

The Female Magician-Lyela
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« Reply #1 on: July 28, 2008, 01:11:55 pm »
Why don't you lock the epic topic so you make sure noone posts in there?
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« Reply #2 on: July 28, 2008, 01:28:31 pm »
Quote from: hyprgig on July 28, 2008, 01:11:55 pm
Why don't you lock the epic topic so you make sure noone posts in there?
Because I trust people not to post there, that's the kind of person I am...

And please post comments about the actual epic here from now on Wink
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« Reply #3 on: July 28, 2008, 01:39:04 pm »
Fine. That epic is long. I've only read the first 10 sentences.
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« Reply #4 on: July 28, 2008, 02:04:10 pm »
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Fine. That epic is long. I've only read the first 10 sentences.
Thank you, and that post is just the first part of the prologue...
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« Reply #5 on: July 28, 2008, 02:08:07 pm »
Well now I have read the top 3 paragraphs. I just finished reading the end of the former king Forna. You are an excellent writer.

EDIT: How long will it take for you to put in the next part?!? I wanna read it so badly *starts to groan really extra loud*.
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« Reply #6 on: July 28, 2008, 02:36:36 pm »
There are now two parts, and I plan to do 2-3 installments a day.
I am glad you think I am a good writer, and that you wish to read the next part.
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« Reply #7 on: July 28, 2008, 02:53:19 pm »
I will say this in big bold letters;

GIVE ME THE NEXT CHAPTER! PLEASE GIVE IT TO ME, I AM HOOKED!
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« Reply #8 on: July 28, 2008, 05:49:05 pm »
The second last part of the prologue has been added...
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« Reply #9 on: July 29, 2008, 06:16:36 am »
Come on ZLS, please give me more! I'm hooked on it and this is one addiction I can help til I get to read the whole epic and don't you dare say, "All in good time hypr, all in good time."

EDIT: I found a typo. It is in the 2nd or 3rd sentence. It says "borwn" instead of "brown."

2nd EDIT: I found another typo. Okay, 1st paragraph, last sentence. It says, "stilld a mistery" instead of "still a mystery."

3rd EDIT: I found yet another typo. 2nd paragraph , first sentence. It says, "garded" instead of "guarded."
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« Reply #10 on: July 29, 2008, 12:01:18 pm »
Thank you for your support hypr. I hate typos a lot...
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« Reply #11 on: July 29, 2008, 06:45:18 pm »
Your welcome ZLS. You deserve it, after all I've got hooked on it after reading the first part of the prologue.
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« Reply #12 on: August 01, 2008, 12:24:12 pm »
Three parts of Chapter one are up Grin
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« Reply #13 on: August 02, 2008, 07:14:13 am »
How many chapters are there and how many more parts of chapter one are left?
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« Reply #14 on: August 02, 2008, 08:28:20 am »
Dunno... depends how many ideas come to me, and how many side stories and flashbacks I do...
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« Reply #15 on: August 02, 2008, 08:31:10 am »
Well don't you dare stop yet. It is getting really good, but who stole Renne? Why was Renne trying to take her own life?
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« Reply #16 on: August 02, 2008, 08:40:39 am »
Who took her is a mystery... for now...
But unless I worded it wrong, Patrick(her brother) was trying to kill her, she just wanted to leave earth(Terra Eterna)

I'm not going to stop quite yet Grin
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Well it sounded like Patrick was in shock as Renne was trying to kill herself. I put myself in Patrick's shoes after I was sucked in.
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« Reply #18 on: August 02, 2008, 09:05:47 am »
Just added the fourth part to chapter one... it's short, but it's leading into chapter two, which isn't too close yet...

You won't be seeing to much more of the deamon world in chapter one, more of Patrick, Renee, the dog(maybe), and the mystery beast...
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« Reply #19 on: August 02, 2008, 09:52:38 am »
You are quite good at this epic ZLS.
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