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« Reply #60 on: September 09, 2008, 05:30:31 pm » |
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Interlude four is up, hopefully its easier to understand  |
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« Reply #61 on: September 10, 2008, 03:06:30 pm » |
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Yes it is. I see that Exaltoskull is dead or dying and is being dragged across the ground. For what I don't know.
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« Reply #62 on: September 10, 2008, 06:04:03 pm » |
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Exaltoskull is dying, and another deamon is dragging him towards the forest on Eterna Peninsula... I am making a map of the planet/island the epic takes place on, so you'll see where things are going on  |
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« Reply #63 on: September 11, 2008, 02:12:35 pm » |
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A visual. Have fun creating that.
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« Reply #64 on: September 11, 2008, 06:14:14 pm » |
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Its gonna be in paint, so don't expect much... |
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« Reply #65 on: September 12, 2008, 02:11:12 pm » |
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I am not gonna, but you can go a little more graphic language like dam. Is Nara a traitor?
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« Reply #66 on: September 12, 2008, 04:57:43 pm » |
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Yay you took my advice. Since I am the only one reading it, it shouldn't bother anyone. should it? Where in the hell did that traitor go off to?
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« Reply #67 on: September 12, 2008, 07:25:39 pm » |
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I always had planned for Nara to betray the team... but later on you'll fully understand what's going on  |
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« Reply #68 on: September 13, 2008, 11:36:12 am » |
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I absolutely love the sig CRX created.
Why did Nara betray them? To save her family or for another reason?
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« Reply #69 on: September 13, 2008, 03:07:50 pm » |
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Deamons don't really have family...
>>it was for another reason.
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« Reply #70 on: September 13, 2008, 03:12:48 pm » |
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Do you know chapter it is gonna be in? Also, when are you going to post another part of it?
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« Reply #71 on: September 13, 2008, 04:19:34 pm » |
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Most likely near the end of part one... and as for the next post-- soon  |
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« Reply #72 on: September 13, 2008, 04:20:29 pm » |
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How close is the end of part 1?
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« Reply #73 on: September 13, 2008, 06:36:31 pm » |
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Let's see... I'm on chapter four, and my plan was for seven chapters... but it may be shortened to six if I can find a way to make the story flow nicely together in six chapters... Next part is up |
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« Reply #74 on: September 14, 2008, 05:16:09 am » |
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Don't you mean 2 parts?
What did you mean b the word "emerlad"? Did you do a typo and misspelled emerald?
I love your cliffhanger.
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« Reply #75 on: September 14, 2008, 11:35:49 am » |
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Don't you mean 2 parts?
What did you mean b the word "emerlad"? Did you do a typo and misspelled emerald?
I love your cliffhanger.
I wasn't sure if you'd read the first of the two parts... Yes, I meant emerald: Crioone is blue/silver, Nara red/crimson, Taverna green/emerald Thanks |
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« Reply #76 on: September 15, 2008, 02:32:37 pm » |
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Your welcome. I think I have become your untitled editor.
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« Reply #77 on: September 15, 2008, 05:37:05 pm » |
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all good authors need an editor |
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« Reply #78 on: September 15, 2008, 06:02:10 pm » |
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Yea, but I am a good editor. I am not mean when I edit your work while reading it. Don't forget to edit the emerald mistake. It is in your 3rd latest entry.
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« Reply #79 on: September 15, 2008, 07:17:47 pm » |
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Exaltoskull is gonna become a Reaper if he wants to live!?
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