Message #330168

[KnightsFan]

Yes, I thought that's what was going on. But the entire story is written in past tense, so he should be insane throughout in that case. The change in narration makes it feel too much like a short story and not a realistic memoir, in my opinion.

I mean, I don't care who he is or where he came from, but I don't see why you would put him in the story. He feels a little like the "forced plot twist" we talked about on your other story.

In any case, these are nitpicky details. The stories are great. Is the title related to the Simon & Garfunkel song by any chance? That happens to be one of my favorite songs.