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« on: February 05, 2009, 11:23:46 am » |
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Comment on The Awakening here. Story link. |
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The massage boards are still horrible.
1000 new posts in DoaH does not mean the forum is alive and kicking, it means that at least you, me, and Skye were bored. =P
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« Reply #1 on: February 05, 2009, 11:40:01 am » |
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Ooh, good. I like the idea - humans and Bionicle in the same world. I'm glad you're in the real Bionicle world and not Glatoria.
Do you need guest stars?
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« Reply #2 on: February 05, 2009, 11:46:40 am » |
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Ooh, good. I like the idea - humans and Bionicle in the same world. I'm glad you're in the real Bionicle world and not Glatoria.
Do you need guest stars?
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1. Yeeeah... Humans and Bionicle in the same world. Right. >_> <_< >_> <_< >_> <_< 2. Yeah, Karda Nui for now, before the Awakening of Mata Nui. 3. If you want. I'm still working out exactly how they look and such, but I think I've got it pretty much. |
-==Blade's Story Library==-
-==Blade's RPG Library==-Hey! Don't diss the sonic!
The massage boards are still horrible.
1000 new posts in DoaH does not mean the forum is alive and kicking, it means that at least you, me, and Skye were bored. =P
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« Reply #3 on: February 05, 2009, 11:59:08 am » |
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I love the suspence/unknown aspect you've left at the end of the chapter. It makes me want to read on, except there's nothing else to read  Good job! |
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« Reply #4 on: February 05, 2009, 12:01:08 pm » |
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Thanks. =)
I think I might start work on Chapter 1, I've got a few ideas, some of which will *Spoilers of something else here*. =D
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« Reply #5 on: February 05, 2009, 12:51:57 pm » |
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Cool. I like how you added yourself into 08 storyline. Adds a nice change to the story, and it gives me something Bionicle to read while I wait for the 09 book and other web serials  |
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« Reply #6 on: February 05, 2009, 01:03:58 pm » |
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That won't be the only change to the '08 storyline...  |
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-==Blade's RPG Library==-Hey! Don't diss the sonic!
The massage boards are still horrible.
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« Reply #7 on: February 28, 2009, 05:30:19 am » |
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Intersting, and creative, but "Are you ready for a challenge"
The challenge is a contest, I hope you enter..
"Interesting" and "creative" because I use a simalar style when writing. I put myself in the story because I believe it enhances imagination
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