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« on: February 05, 2009, 11:23:46 am » |
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Comment on The Awakening here. Story link. |
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« Reply #1 on: February 05, 2009, 11:40:01 am » |
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Ooh, good. I like the idea - humans and Bionicle in the same world. I'm glad you're in the real Bionicle world and not Glatoria.
Do you need guest stars?
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« Reply #2 on: February 05, 2009, 11:46:40 am » |
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Ooh, good. I like the idea - humans and Bionicle in the same world. I'm glad you're in the real Bionicle world and not Glatoria.
Do you need guest stars?
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1. Yeeeah... Humans and Bionicle in the same world. Right. >_> <_< >_> <_< >_> <_< 2. Yeah, Karda Nui for now, before the Awakening of Mata Nui. 3. If you want. I'm still working out exactly how they look and such, but I think I've got it pretty much. |
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« Reply #3 on: February 05, 2009, 11:59:08 am » |
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I love the suspence/unknown aspect you've left at the end of the chapter. It makes me want to read on, except there's nothing else to read  Good job! |
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« Reply #4 on: February 05, 2009, 12:01:08 pm » |
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Thanks. =)
I think I might start work on Chapter 1, I've got a few ideas, some of which will *Spoilers of something else here*. =D
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« Reply #5 on: February 05, 2009, 12:51:57 pm » |
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Cool. I like how you added yourself into 08 storyline. Adds a nice change to the story, and it gives me something Bionicle to read while I wait for the 09 book and other web serials  |
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« Reply #6 on: February 05, 2009, 01:03:58 pm » |
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That won't be the only change to the '08 storyline...  |
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« Reply #7 on: February 28, 2009, 05:30:19 am » |
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Intersting, and creative, but "Are you ready for a challenge"
The challenge is a contest, I hope you enter..
"Interesting" and "creative" because I use a simalar style when writing. I put myself in the story because I believe it enhances imagination
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