Destiny of a Hero -- V.2 -- Discussion

[Blade]

Discuss the new epic here...

Epic topic.

[lionytai]

the epic isn't finished now, is it?

[Blade]

Oh no, it's just getting started. I just have to figure out if I'm gonna have it separate from the RPG characters, or just focus on my own characters. Also, the RPG here's still open and still alive, if anyone wants to sign up...

[Maplen13]

Oh no, it's just getting started. I just have to figure out if I'm gonna have it separate from the RPG characters, or just focus on my own characters. Also, the RPG here's still open and still alive, if anyone wants to sign up...

Nice Story along to go with an RPG, I say that's what people should do these days not just make one out of random.

But I think I want to join, Does it have modern civilizations & governments?

[Blade]

Civilizations would be the same as now, but the government isn't exactly focused on because of the situation, but the Chaos Hunters do have a mock government you could say...

Neo, the leader of at least his team
Neo's Chaos Guardians
The Chaos Hunter Elite
and the regular Chaos Hunters.

And if you really wanna get into technicalities, the Story came first, as this BZP topic proves =)

[Maplen13]

Civilizations would be the same as now, but the government isn't exactly focused on because of the situation, but the Chaos Hunters do have a mock government you could say...

Neo, the leader of at least his team
Neo's Chaos Guardians
The Chaos Hunter Elite
and the regular Chaos Hunters.

And if you really wanna get into technicalities, the Story came first, as this BZP topic proves =)

hmm.. quite so.. how much do they mock it? But is there a sort of Government active, or in brink?

And well... What technoligical/politilcal/scientific(If this RPG even considers this) significane?

[Blade]

Please note, this post may contain spoilers for future plot and such.

1. I meant like it resembles a government kind of in the fact that it has multiple stages, but in technicality, since the Chaos Hunters are trying to take control of the world's forces to suit their own cause, the world's actual government may be under the Chaos Hunter's Control. Haven't really put much thought into that part.

2. Technological isn't really that much different, except the Chosen Ones have special Armour that resonates with their Ki power, activating as Ki Metal, a special metal that can be molded into different kinds of types that reacts with Ki, forming as a full body suit of armour, that, because the armour's version of Ki metal is flexible, doesn't require any gaps and provides somewhat more protection than normal armour. Plus, the helmet it provide's visor has a few features built into it. That said, it can be broken, and if you suddenly lose the power of Ki, then it will be unusable, except in very rare circumstances, where the strain on the Ki crystal powering it will break it, requiring you to find a new one, or somehow make a new one. Most armour cubes are housed in special devices, like the Personal Data Holders or a special upgrade to that that is currently being worked on in the current chapter of this forum's DoaH. Speaking of which, it has many apps, and functions mostly as an advanced communication device.

Political was technically covered up there, but here's a somewhat easier way to think of it. The Chaos Hunters, an apparently law enforcing group, have different groups, all under the control of a bigger leader. Neo's group is led by Neo, and he controls others. The Chaos Hunters, however, are secretly from the public trying to get rid of the Chosen Ones, which Neo fears because of a personal vendetta, and the fact that it may interfere with his plans. But, he's saying this is justifiable because they're dangerous criminals, while in reality it's the other way around. But, he's also urging the public to leave matters to the Chaos Hunters.

Finally, scientific. Well, for one, the Chosen Ones can wield and manipulate Ki. That gives them a few advantages over the Chaos Hunters, but the Chaos Hunters literally push themselves to their limits to get stronger, undergoing strenuous training.

[Solo Rogue]

Chapter 2 finally up, I finally got around to it =D Also, I finally got around to trying to figure out where stuff in the school was.

[Blade]

Chapter 3 up, hopefully it won't take a month for the next chapter. =P

[Rahkshi8000]

Awesome epic Blade, can't wait for the next few chapters 

[Blade]

Thanks. =) Hopefully the next chapter will be up like tomorrow... All depends if I have time.

[Blade]

Okay; I fail at meeting timelines I see. xP

Fourth Chapter of the Prologue up now.

I definitely will have my fifth chapter of the prologue up today or tomorrow; I succeed at advancing DoaH stuff when nothing's happening elsewhere in the forum. =P

[mtmerrick]

nice story. might wanna proofread it tho. and get rid of some of those run-on sentences.

[Blade]

Proof-read? Why? Don't think there were any errors.(Some may be the non-American spellings; like colour instead of color. =P)

And ah yes, run on sentences, my nemesis. xP I've attempted to reduce them in Chapter 0.5, but some have the info because splitting them may require repeating things. =P

Chapter 0.5'll be dealing with the start of the actual plot(Chaos Hunters starting to reveal themselves), and with any luck, we'll start the actual Chapter 1(with the new numbering system starting this chapter) sometime this month. =)